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My Heart Is Still Bleeding For You
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Created on 4-3-08
Drove by your house last night, for one sight,
Just to see you, just to see your beautiful face,
To calm my soul, without it my heart isn't whole,
And It would die here alone in this horrible place.
I still remember, that cold day in December,
When we danced and I looked into your eyes,
Under the moon, while the wind sings a tune,
thinking of this brings tears, I cant help but cry.
So I just keep driving on, knowing your gone,
I'm missing you here, not knowing what to do,
All the words that you said, play in my head,
While My Heart Is Still Bleeding For You.
The Triquatrain form was created by Robert L. Huntsman. It is a quatrain poem in tri-rhyme with a specific rhyming pattern (see below). Lines 1 and 3 have internal rhyme whereas lines 2 and 4 do not.
a,a,b,c,c,b. d,d,e,f,f,e....
Just to see you, just to see your beautiful face,
To calm my soul, without it my heart isn't whole,
And It would die here alone in this horrible place.
I still remember, that cold day in December,
When we danced and I looked into your eyes,
Under the moon, while the wind sings a tune,
thinking of this brings tears, I cant help but cry.
So I just keep driving on, knowing your gone,
I'm missing you here, not knowing what to do,
All the words that you said, play in my head,
While My Heart Is Still Bleeding For You.
The Triquatrain form was created by Robert L. Huntsman. It is a quatrain poem in tri-rhyme with a specific rhyming pattern (see below). Lines 1 and 3 have internal rhyme whereas lines 2 and 4 do not.
a,a,b,c,c,b. d,d,e,f,f,e....
Please Login to post comments| On May 1st 2008 DontStealArt Said : | |
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| On May 1st 2008 tyiqoqibfiobao Said : | |
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be warned Jermie6363 has be found stealing others poems if you would like links to specific poems they can be found at this chat http://www.testriffic.com/chats/43911 or you can message me and i will show you where he stole the poems from some are his but most of his top ones are stolen thank you the next one robbed could be u
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| On April 21st 2008 mcihellejane Said : | |
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I have to attempt to write one of these triquatrains-you make it seem so easy!! |
| On April 10th 2008 dsouthernlily Said : | |
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awww |
| On April 10th 2008 mydragonlord Said : | |
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ok nicely done man!! |
| On April 4th 2008 stef4732 Said : | |
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Very nice i love it :) |
| On April 4th 2008 lisaljb Said : | |
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Lovely poem! Interesting style, lol I always freestyle, not intending to do a certain pattern. |
| On April 4th 2008 unknownwolfie Said : | |
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wow .... yip i know tht feeling ... great poem, I could totally relate |
| On April 4th 2008 muse4apoem Said : | |
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You have so much talent in the poetry world! Keep up the good work! :) |
| On April 3rd 2008 angeleyes62580 Said : | |
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Very good |
| On April 3rd 2008 moosegurl01 Said : | |
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really good |
| On April 3rd 2008 f2daerg2i2e Said : | |
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almost made me cry. me and my boyfriend just broke up yesterday :( |
| On April 3rd 2008 jeff2625 Said : | |
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love it.. |
