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Concrete Angel

Views (210) Pain Created on 4-3-08 Flag
A sweet child, born on a snowy night,
born too early but still giving a fight.
The parents took drugs, this poor baby,
born for the world, so they could see.

A sweet child of nearly one,
born early from what his parents had done.
Doctors are baffled, not much to do
he is suffering from death thats overdue.

A sweet child of nearly two,
still fighting for life, not much he can do.
The nurses try to fulfill the babies needs,
hoping he will live, hoping to succeed.

Now a sweet child of nearly three,
died one snowy night for the world to see.
How cruel life is, now its too late,
his life has ended, given by fate.

May all that reads this understand,
join together and hold hands.
Learn to love and not to hate,
so no more kids follow his child's fate.


another sad story i had to read in the paper, sadly this happens everyday, i hope everyone learns from this.
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On April 10th 2008 mydragonlord Said :
mydragonlord so sad jet so true.
On April 6th 2008 mackenzie3893 Said :
mackenzie3893 That was so amazing! I love your work!
On April 5th 2008 ForgotHow2Love Said :
ForgotHow2Love This is so sad, but so true. There should be more people in this world like you.
On April 4th 2008 stef4732 Said :
stef4732 Awww I'm speachless
On April 4th 2008 lisaljb Said :
lisaljb You give such an impression as a sweetheart, deep and caring person! Lovely work!
On April 4th 2008 yeyoalvizo Said :
yeyoalvizo this poem is so sad:( and i truly hope that ppl get the message...
On April 3rd 2008 angeleyes62580 Said :
angeleyes62580 So very sad, sadly it happens more and more instead of less and less.
On April 3rd 2008 CSLuvr Said :
my picture
wow :[
On April 3rd 2008 jeff2625 Said :
jeff2625 aw...so sad...yes, we live in a crazy world..we have to learn that what we do, affects others..great job writing..you have a such a big heart..dont ever lose it...