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A Picture In A Frame (Acrostic)
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Created on 4-2-08
All the times I've seen you, my heart can't help but race,
Pain still exists, when I look at your beautiful face.
Instantly destroying all of the feelings I have for you,
Calling out your name, wishing you loved me too.
Torture still remains, but you never really cared,
Unable to go on with my life, knowing you won't be there.
Remnants of this broken heart, they will last an eternity,
Every time my eyes meet yours, I know you don't love me.
Insanity is all that remains, just wishing it would end,
Not knowing where I should start, or where to begin.
A picture in a frame, is all I have left of those days
Frozen through time, is all the beauty that it portrays
Reality starts to kicks in, and I can finally realize,
All the pain I've been through, there's no more goodbyes.
More that I realize this, the more I feel the same,
Every time that I look at her picture in a frame.
Acrostic Poetry is where the first letter of each line spells a word, usually using the same words as in the title.
Pain still exists, when I look at your beautiful face.
Instantly destroying all of the feelings I have for you,
Calling out your name, wishing you loved me too.
Torture still remains, but you never really cared,
Unable to go on with my life, knowing you won't be there.
Remnants of this broken heart, they will last an eternity,
Every time my eyes meet yours, I know you don't love me.
Insanity is all that remains, just wishing it would end,
Not knowing where I should start, or where to begin.
A picture in a frame, is all I have left of those days
Frozen through time, is all the beauty that it portrays
Reality starts to kicks in, and I can finally realize,
All the pain I've been through, there's no more goodbyes.
More that I realize this, the more I feel the same,
Every time that I look at her picture in a frame.
Acrostic Poetry is where the first letter of each line spells a word, usually using the same words as in the title.
Please Login to post comments| On May 1st 2008 DontStealArt Said : | |
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| On May 1st 2008 tyiqoqibfiobao Said : | |
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be warned Jermie6363 has be found stealing others poems if you would like links to specific poems they can be found at this chat http://www.testriffic.com/chats/43911 or you can message me and i will show you where he stole the poems from some are his but most of his top ones are stolen thank you the next one robbed could be u
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| On April 3rd 2008 mydragonlord Said : | |
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this is one of the many styles that i am yet to try so who knows maybe soon i too will have an Acostic piece up. as to this piece, this master piece, what is there to say but you never fail to deliver! Brilliant. |
| On April 2nd 2008 seekerovtruth Said : | |
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Applause applause from the crowd!!!! You never cease to amaze me, no matter what style of writing you embark upon. Another gem to add to your poetry portfolio. Exquisite!!! |
| On April 2nd 2008 poemprincess Said : | |
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I loved it =) |
| On April 2nd 2008 mcihellejane Said : | |
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Loved it. So many times acrostic poetry is shallow and ill fitting, but you did a wonderful job w/ this one. Actually what made this one super great to me was the way you built so strongly around the title-there is so much depth to this poem, just as a photo can bring on so many emotions of all kinds. So much is held w/ in the frame in the title and amongst the lettered lines of the poem. Spectacular job my friend!! |
| On April 2nd 2008 jetkills Said : | |
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sweet :P |
