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Your Beautiful Smile (Acrostic)

Views (188) Love Created on 4-2-08 Flag

Y our beautiful smile tears me apart,
O nly one who can heal my broken heart.
U ntil the end of time, I'll love you,
R endered helpless, hoping you love me too.

B ecause of you I can now sleep,
'E'verywher I go, your love I will keep.
A ll the loneliness I've gone through,
U sed to be alone, until I found you.
T ender are your lips upon my face,
I nstant joy, surrounds this dark place.
F inally happy, my heart can now be,
U nderneath the stars, for all eternity.
L aying there with you is the sweetest bliss,

S uspended in time, by your beautiful kiss.
M y heart becomes whole, so complete
I n every glance when our eyes meet,
L ying here, my memories linger awhile,
E very time I see Your Beautiful Smile.

 

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On April 7th 2008 BiAnIcole Said :
BiAnIcole loved it.
On April 2nd 2008 seekerovtruth Said :
seekerovtruth I too enjoy writing in this style. For me it forces things out that may not have come out if not being led by that first little letter. There's a place called shadowpoetry.com that you might want to have a peek at. It shows all kinds of different styles of poetry there. I'm sure you'd be one who could tackle just about any type and create something beautiful with it. Have fun as I will reading them. June
On April 2nd 2008 poemprincess Said :
poemprincess this is so good i would give it 100 votes if I could.
On April 2nd 2008 jetkills Said :
jetkills wow awesome i tired writing a acrostic poem once lets just say it didn't go to good :P