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A Fathers Justice
When Felton’s parents finally passed on,
he prayed to find a wife each day.
He worked on the farm from dawn till dusk,
but knew God would find him a way.
He met a lady in Church one Sunday
and invited her out to his farm.
As he began to court her quite often
he fell for her beauty and charm.
They were only one year into marriage
until she gave birth to a girl.
Felton loved his wife very deeply,
but the child became his world.
His wife tried hard, but just couldn’t stay,
so she left and broke Felton’s heart.
We know he finally got over his wife,
but the little girl tore him apart.
The wife remarried and decided to move
to a town three hours away.
He saw his child one weekend a month
and they alternated holidays.
His daughter reached her sixteenth year
and he bought her a very nice car.
He hoped since she had a car to drive
she wouldn’t say he lived too far.
He noticed her car in the drive and worried,
she was not due to visit that day.
Then he saw her crying and shaking
and she never had acted that way.
The more she told him, the angrier he got,
but he held her trying to wipe her tears.
She told him how her mother’s husband
had been raping her now for years.
He picked her up and carried her home
gave her a pill and put her in bed.
He almost went to bring back the sheriff,
but took both of his guns out instead.
The jury tried hard to find him not guilty
and most wanted to just let him go,
But Felton had not just killed the man,
he had made sure the man died slow.
His daughter comes to visit each Sunday,
sits with him and talks for awhile.
He can tell she is doing a lot better,
sometimes she laughs and smiles.
He has finally managed to help her see
in no part did she have any blame.
Now she is married with her own children
and she knows she would do the same.
he prayed to find a wife each day.
He worked on the farm from dawn till dusk,
but knew God would find him a way.
He met a lady in Church one Sunday
and invited her out to his farm.
As he began to court her quite often
he fell for her beauty and charm.
They were only one year into marriage
until she gave birth to a girl.
Felton loved his wife very deeply,
but the child became his world.
His wife tried hard, but just couldn’t stay,
so she left and broke Felton’s heart.
We know he finally got over his wife,
but the little girl tore him apart.
The wife remarried and decided to move
to a town three hours away.
He saw his child one weekend a month
and they alternated holidays.
His daughter reached her sixteenth year
and he bought her a very nice car.
He hoped since she had a car to drive
she wouldn’t say he lived too far.
He noticed her car in the drive and worried,
she was not due to visit that day.
Then he saw her crying and shaking
and she never had acted that way.
The more she told him, the angrier he got,
but he held her trying to wipe her tears.
She told him how her mother’s husband
had been raping her now for years.
He picked her up and carried her home
gave her a pill and put her in bed.
He almost went to bring back the sheriff,
but took both of his guns out instead.
The jury tried hard to find him not guilty
and most wanted to just let him go,
But Felton had not just killed the man,
he had made sure the man died slow.
His daughter comes to visit each Sunday,
sits with him and talks for awhile.
He can tell she is doing a lot better,
sometimes she laughs and smiles.
He has finally managed to help her see
in no part did she have any blame.
Now she is married with her own children
and she knows she would do the same.
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| On May 1st 2008 tyiqoqibfiobao Said : | |
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be warned Jermie6363 has be found stealing others poems if you would like links to specific poems they can be found at this chat http://www.testriffic.com/chats/43911 or you can message me and i will show you where he stole the poems from some are his but most of his top ones are stolen thank you the next one robbed could be u
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| On April 2nd 2008 Halfpint9135 Said : | |
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Wow. |
| On April 2nd 2008 piratesrule78 Said : | |
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awsome keep up the good work! |
| On April 2nd 2008 mydragonlord Said : | |
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the love a parent has for their children can be so strong that they will and can kill form them if need be. brilliantly written!! |
| On April 2nd 2008 angeleyes62580 Said : | |
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This is wonderful!! Great Job |
| On April 1st 2008 NeuroticErin Said : | |
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That was really deep, was that from experience or did you make it up? |
| On April 1st 2008 lisaljb Said : | |
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Sad and beautiful, impressive! :) |
| On April 1st 2008 shadyishott Said : | |
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my dad wanted to do that but my mom didnt let him she wanted to do it [LOL] NICE POEM I LUV IT
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| On April 1st 2008 xxpunkchik89xx Said : | |
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awwwww.im crying...seriously!!good job i really love this one!!!! |
| On April 1st 2008 craxychik Said : | |
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WOW!!! i luv it!!!!!!!! ur so talented! lol |
| On April 1st 2008 hpriestess Said : | |
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And to think in one day & age that would have been a father's right to protect his child. Now the world is all backwards. I really enjoy your work when you expand it like you did in this one |
| On April 1st 2008 gonzo4201 Said : | |
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YOU BETTER DAMN BELIEVE!! Excellent poem, wonderfully done, loved the storytelling, and you better believe, I would do the same! |
| On April 1st 2008 AnaAlicia07 Said : | |
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I LIKE THIS ONE ALOT....NICE WORK....♥ |
| On April 1st 2008 moosegurl01 Said : | |
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that was really good..i liked it |
| On April 1st 2008 muse4apoem Said : | |
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Good work! I really like it! |
| On April 1st 2008 Thuggishone Said : | |
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very beautiful |
| On April 1st 2008 goosebumpgirl1 Said : | |
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again just wow |


