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Feels Like I'm Counting. |
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Perfect. |
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Care. |
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What Happened To Her... |
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Cute |
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Missed Memories |
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The Pathway |
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Our Ending.. |
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So Sick So Sorry |
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My Everything |
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What Ended Us. |
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The Belt. |
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Backstabber [For Demise] |
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'Perfect' Girls. |
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Testriffic. |
Don't Care.
I figured I'd leave and let you go,
If you wanted be friends, I'd let you show,
Cause theres pain from you thats hurting me,
I've let you go and now I see,
[Chorus]
You don't care much,
You hurt me all the time,
You don't care much,
You got me for a dime,
You don't care much,
This pain I see,
You don't care much,
Think you're better than me.
And now we're over, our world undone,
I'll just kick back and have some fun,
Cause theres pain from you thats hurting me,
I've let you go and now you see,
[Chorus]
You don't care much,
You hurt me all the time,
You don't care much,
You got me for a dime,
You don't care much,
This pain I see,
You don't care much,
Think you're better than me.
I've looked around at everyone,
These couples around, havin' fun in the sun,
They tell the truth, they dont tell lies,
I know it's real don't got my head in the skies...
Cause theres pain from you thats hurting me,
I've let you go and now we see,
[Chorus]
You don't care much,
You hurt me all the time,
You don't care much,
You got me for a dime,
You don't care much,
This pain I see,
You don't care much,
Think you're better than me.
You don't care much... [x3]
You don't care much about me...
| On July 17th 2007 chickenbroth Said : | |
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hey sorry it took me so long to reply to you request but I've been tragicly busy. I enjoyed reading this, thats for bringing it to my attention. Make sure to tell me when your next masterpeice is up. |
| On July 15th 2007 Johanne93 Said : | |
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um...if you want praise then i think itz a really good song...if you want criticism then i think you should try using different words for the chorus, try opening up more. but yeah itz good, should have music. =] |
| On July 15th 2007 California1516 Said : | |
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wow i can relate completely..and this is really good! |
| On July 15th 2007 Xpoetxgurlx Said : | |
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this is really very good!! ^.^ |
| On July 15th 2007 babyblue187954 Said : | |
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I know how it feels .. Kindah like you stated in the poem you see others having fun in the sun.. Its like when your in a bad relationship or just getting out of one that hurt you look around at everyone and it seems they found there one and only.. when that could be exactly what you thought |
| On July 15th 2007 fgggfx Said : | |
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its really good! |
| On July 14th 2007 101091 Said : | |
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I love it. Great job. |
| On July 14th 2007 tswieberg Said : | |
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This is truly an amazing lyric. I would love to hear this as a song. |
| On July 14th 2007 jarnotti Said : | |
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thats good |
| On July 14th 2007 cjaskot Said : | |
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hehehe, I found that mistake after the second time you posted it =D |
| On July 14th 2007 Jeff1315 Said : | |
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If you wanted TO*** be friends, I'd let you show,
lol.. |
| On July 14th 2007 cjaskot Said : | |
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Yes, you really should learn how to play guitar. This would sound great with instruments, ummm, what else did i say...ummmm, oh yea youve got great talent aye =D |


