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Written over a span of 4 months... lol

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Always Near?

Views (221) Other Created on 7-11-07 Flag

I'm stuck at a fork on the pathway of life,
One path might lead back to my 'future wife',
It also might end up stopping there,
Person giving advice doesn't seem to care.

They don't want to be the thing stopping me here,
They tell me, tell me, they'll always be near,
I want to choose the best possible one,
I want to, this isn't, isn't that fun.

The one that I felt, would always be near,
She left me, she left me, she isn't here,
I thought I had chosen, thought it was best,
But now that it's over, I'll move on to the rest.

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On July 12th 2007 fallenxxseeker Said :
fallenxxseeker rhythm really gives a sense of life rolling on...whether you want it too or not...
On July 11th 2007 jirrith2007 Said :
jirrith2007 I really like this one. I feel like it had a good rhythm to it. I just kinda don't know what you mean in the last line of the 2nd stanza. But overall, a very well-written piece. bravo
On July 11th 2007 California1516 Said :
California1516 i relate to it..i loveeeeee the first line..wow..its a very powerful statement to start off! i love it..nice work
On July 11th 2007 jarnotti Said :
jarnotti wow love this one good job
On July 11th 2007 babyblue187954 Said :
babyblue187954 I liked it. But It could use a little work on the flow.. BUt good enough for a rate
On July 11th 2007 undiie Said :
undiie Great. =]
On July 11th 2007 Tigga16 Said :
Tigga16 This was wonderful! You're definately getting a vote!
On July 11th 2007 101091 Said :
101091 Wow. I love it. Great job. I love the last verse.
On July 11th 2007 HicChic93 Said :
HicChic93 i loved it!!!! it was really great, i know how you feel, i really liked the last verse, but over all the whole poem is great!
On July 11th 2007 cjaskot Said :
cjaskot i love the last verse. its great! deffinately got my vote. although i had to reread the line "I want to, this isn't, isn't that fun." i guess the kinda repeat of the word 'isn't' kinda confused me. but everything else is great.