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Testriffic.

Views (408) Other Created on 7-10-07 Flag
After some days of thinking,
I've come to understand,
This craze thats come along,
Has spread across the land,

This website that I'm using,
To show off all my poems,
It makes some people happy,
And it leaves others 'lone.

I've really come to realize,
This isn't just your work,
Its about how popular you are,
And who you've never hurt.

These things that we have posted,
Have really helped some out,
But other things are just there,
To let our feelings shout.

These things that we have posted,
I wonder all day long,
Was it from the heart or was it,
Just another dreary song?

Do people do this cause its fun,
Or is it something else?
Do some do this, Instead of talking,
Alone just by themselves?

Feels like not just talent,
But popularity,
I feel like anyone can post,
Get many as you or me.
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On July 15th 2008 TheKTGirl Said :
TheKTGirl Wow, that's really good!
On October 29th 2007 comacozi101 Said :
comacozi101 love it, it has an edge and your writing is unique
On July 17th 2007 poet77 Said :
poet77 so true, some people just got votes for popularity, but youre getting mine cause i like this
On July 12th 2007 ivy81 Said :
ivy81 im popular but thats helps me get published so im happy im popular lol
On July 12th 2007 inlovewithc17 Said :
inlovewithc17 wow your totally right this has just turned into a popularity contest and thats totally not what its about i love this poem its so real and true good job!!!!!!!!!!
On July 12th 2007 fallenxxseeker Said :
fallenxxseeker not true dude, you are popular here BECAUSE you have talent, not the other way around...still a good poem
On July 12th 2007 Toxxicduck Said :
Toxxicduck You are an awsome writer. Its so true, but I never surcome to the need to be popular. I just want people to read my work and tell me if its good or not, and hand a few helpful tips.
On July 12th 2007 atmercedes Said :
atmercedes WELL I think you have two types of people, you have the ones who ask others to "check out their stuff" because they want to get more votes, then you have the other people, (like myself) who are true to their work, and would just like to know if the work that came from every ounce of our heart and soul touches that person atall. Ive even had a person tell me that they were shocked that I didnt have more votes than I did, it doesnt bother me, Id rather have 2 people tell me that my work ment something to them, than have 30 people tell me "good job".. but thats just my opinion. ♥ Your a great poet by the way, your work is very true and also deep, your good with your words.
On July 12th 2007 Tigga16 Said :
Tigga16 I so agree with mcihellejane (btw you should read her poems..I love Wedding Toast! It's the shiznit forizzle haha)
On July 11th 2007 jarnotti Said :
jarnotti very good i like it
On July 11th 2007 mcihellejane Said :
mcihellejane You are so right~ I've thought the same thing myself. Anyways, I think it's cool that you spoke up and used your talent to do it!!
On July 11th 2007 101091 Said :
101091 I like it nice job. I think it's true also.
On July 11th 2007 undiie Said :
undiie I agree. I don't go spamming pages, and I'm not a high rated person. So it takes a while for my poems to get good rates. Great poem, and a great message.
On July 10th 2007 aviateress Said :
aviateress very well done. i am personally on here to see what others think of my pics. i am wondering if i have the potential to become a pro photographer. your writing i can tell is getting better. keep up the good work!
On July 10th 2007 numbbbb0z Said :
numbbbb0z Er - "I don't have many votes because of my art, or how unpopular I am" is what I meant XD
On July 10th 2007 numbbbb0z Said :
numbbbb0z I agree with you and California girl - Testriffic is for ARTISTS, and should be about art =) Great message! :D - Overall, it makes me feel good to know that I don't have many votes because of my votes. It feels like an "under-rated/underground" thing, you know? Opposed to all the people who only get ranks because of how "cool" they are in chat. Great message :)
On July 10th 2007 Pooh455 Said :
Pooh455 intresting
On July 10th 2007 babyblue187954 Said :
babyblue187954 I really liked this... I UNDERSTAND IT.. it has helped me too if you go to my site and read from top to bottum yuo will see how ive gotten better
On July 10th 2007 California1516 Said :
California1516 i agree..i mean ..im quite "popular" on this site..but even so..i did a lil experiement one day..and i submitted my artwork without telling anyone i put some up..and the next day i checked and i only had like 4 votes..and when i do tell people i have art up..i get like 15-25 votes..and my art is most of the time in the top art for the day ..and yes this site is about popularity and ive recently havent been telling a ton of people about my art..cuz i feel like if i tell them then i feel like they just vote for it cuz i told them to look at it..and i really dont think this site should be about how many votes you have..it should be about posting anything creative u have..and having people give you their opinions so you can do alot better..and i think when people come to look at ur stuff..they might have ideas that you may not have thought of..this site has its pros and cons..im glad u spoke out about ur opinion.and alot of people should read ur poem..
On July 10th 2007 cjaskot Said :
cjaskot I've really come to realize, This isn't just your work, Its about how popular you are, And who you've never hurt. That is exactly right, its basically a big popularity contest you get to the point that you check the same persons stuff, kinda like i do to yours and even if you dont like it you vote anyways because you dont want them to be mad at you. but i truely think all your poems are good, and i will let you know if i dont like it. this is great! =)
On July 10th 2007 hxcscenekids Said :
hxcscenekids yes, yes indeed me believes it
On July 10th 2007 AstralLoser Said :
AstralLoser Awesome poem, and it's really so true about the way this site works. Very impressed :)
On July 10th 2007 Jessifer713 Said :
Jessifer713 i think this is so true..but you already know that..cause i told you. lol
On July 10th 2007 Jeff1315 Said :
Jeff1315 I'm not bashing on the site, just something i've noticed. And i know at least 4 others that have too.
On July 10th 2007 Jeff1315 Said :
Jeff1315 I feel this site has helped me improve my writing, and still is by having me write more poems, but everyone of you should agree, that this isn't just a poem...