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Backstabber [For Demise]

Views (548) Anger Created on 7-9-07 Flag
Thanks for telling me those lies,
The ones that gave us our demise,
The ending that was soon to be,
I didn't watch I didn't see.

You took my heart and shattered it,
Now you make me feel like shit,
You gave me pain in my heart today,
I need a friend to take away.

I don't want you to be my friend,
I thought we wouldn't have an end,
But then you went and lied today,
You lied to me in this very way.

You fed me many fibs and myths,
About those people you didn't 'dis',
You told me that it wasn't you,
But now I know that you weren't true.

You said to friends that I was lame,
You think that I am just a game,
You're wrong I tell you wrong I say,
I cant believe you hurt this way.

You stabbed my back multiple times,
And all I have is a couple rhymes,
I loved you before but now I don't,
Wanted to see you, now I won't.

I hope you choke I hope you die,
I hope you stop your myths and lies,
The ones that killed us both today,
Just leave, just leave, just go away.

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On July 12th 2007 1CARMELLA1 Said :
1CARMELLA1 i like this i felt the same way once
On July 11th 2007 kiffin1722 Said :
kiffin1722 i like it
On July 11th 2007 stics917 Said :
stics917 hey man this is very depressing but it shows how you really feel good job,just a little emo
On July 11th 2007 Foreverlyn Said :
Foreverlyn It's sad to realize that at times people don't appreciate us in a complete indiscriminate way, but a disappointment like this one shall hinder the many possibilities to come, May you heart rest of the fury and sadness you feel today, smile things will turn out okay.
On July 11th 2007 SmartAzngirl Said :
SmartAzngirl man i feel yur pain same thing happened to me.
On July 11th 2007 Tweezie16 Said :
Tweezie16 that is sum serious shit. did sum1 actually do that 2 u cuz it sure seems like it. damn u got skills u ought 2 b a song writer.
On July 10th 2007 Jessifer713 Said :
Jessifer713 this one is my favorite. i loveee it.
On July 10th 2007 Tigga16 Said :
Tigga16 Loved it!!! ^_^
On July 10th 2007 jarnotti Said :
jarnotti wow i know what your going through but just remember theres always someone else out there :)
On July 10th 2007 Jeff1315 Said :
Jeff1315 Oh and by the way, Demise.. yeah, it's not the girls name... lol
On July 10th 2007 Jeff1315 Said :
Jeff1315 Oh and by the way, Demise.. yeah, it's not the girls name... lol
On July 10th 2007 elmolover2955 Said :
elmolover2955 wow, i can't believe she did that to u, i'm really sorry Sami
On July 10th 2007 Javellef Said :
Javellef Great way to express your emotions. Sometimes the most horrible events ignite in us the fire to write our best poems. This is a great poem!
On July 9th 2007 elmolover2955 Said :
elmolover2955 Awwww.....that was sad...good job though
On July 9th 2007 Pooh455 Said :
Pooh455 awe sad but amazing.
On July 9th 2007 ThisIsTheDay Said :
ThisIsTheDay awwz. i like this. -Lozer™[knows how you feel]
On July 9th 2007 cjaskot Said :
cjaskot this is great =) very sad, but very nice
On July 9th 2007 101091 Said :
101091 Wow... Great poem... I'll agree with SoftballLvr213... sadly girls are bitches sometimes. I really like this poem though.
On July 9th 2007 California1516 Said :
California1516 WOWWWWW..now this had amazing flow to it!! SEE ur getting better..YAY! :D this is terribley sadening..and i can relate completely :(
On July 9th 2007 mazblondie Said :
mazblondie loved the poem,flowed along lovely,was full of emotion,but you handled the emotions well.enjoyed it ver much,am honored you wanted me to read it .
On July 9th 2007 MomWhoCares Said :
MomWhoCares Great job. Sometimes it's hard to get a good rhythm and rhyme without compromising your emotions, but you have done an excellent job here.
On July 9th 2007 Jeff1315 Said :
Jeff1315 lol, I didnt expect to get sympathy for this, just was lettin everyone know it wasnt fictional :P
On July 9th 2007 fallenxxseeker Said :
fallenxxseeker wow.....straight from the heart of an Artist...the beginning was a little shaky...but it seems like you got angrier as you went along, and that fueled the poem too.....im impressed once again, and sorry for your pain
On July 9th 2007 kimmaigirlai Said :
kimmaigirlai wow this is sad... i felt a little pain in my back when u said "i hope you choke i hope you die"
this is really good. ur an awesome writer!
On July 9th 2007 aviateress Said :
aviateress aww that is sad.... great way of writing it but still aweful you had to go through that.