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Probably the best poem ive ever wrote :)Rate this Poem
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Missed Memories
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Created on 7-6-07
My life is full, full of things,
Things of which I miss,
I miss those things, and even rings,
The ones that gave her bliss.
I wish she'd left my heart right there,
Not stolen it away,
I wish she hadn't left despair,
When she cheated on that day.
There's still those things about her,
That I will not lose,
Memories of things we shared,
Things that brought me muse.
Please Login to post comments| On July 30th 2008 eatstickers22 Said : | |
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its like youre pushing rhyming. |
| On July 10th 2007 babyblue187954 Said : | |
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I really like that.. I wish I could write that way.. You describe something that caused so much pain in sway that helps someone thats been through it get over it. |
| On July 9th 2007 milolover36 Said : | |
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awww... I have nothing else to say but two thumbs and two toes(don't ask) WAY upp!!! lol |
| On July 8th 2007 shalimarbolton Said : | |
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i wish i had those things you had i feel your pain i was in the same position you were in |
| On July 8th 2007 xxbuggie Said : | |
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Im sorry the content is slightly heartbreaking, but your work is great. Im a fan = ] |
| On July 8th 2007 Tigga16 Said : | |
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Short but heartfelt...I love it. This is a great poem. |
| On July 6th 2007 djgirl15 Said : | |
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ooooooo i like it............. |
| On July 6th 2007 California1516 Said : | |
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oopsies..i meant nice* lol not ice..haha |
| On July 6th 2007 California1516 Said : | |
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wow..great poem..its sad..i relate to this poem..ice work :) |
| On July 6th 2007 hxcscenekids Said : | |
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aww Jeffy *hugs* |
| On July 6th 2007 101091 Said : | |
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Wow... Very heartfelt and deeply written. I truely love this one and agree with everyone else so far on this one. |
| On July 6th 2007 mcihellejane Said : | |
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I like this one. It is very heartfelt. It seems like no matter how many bad memories we have of relationships that ended, there are always the ones that make us look back and smile. Great expression and word choice in this one! |
| On July 6th 2007 Javellef Said : | |
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It is funny how those that bring us pain are the very ones who are the muse of our inspiration. Your poem is well written with feeling. |
| On July 6th 2007 AstralLoser Said : | |
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Great poem, has a really good flow to it. Work of art! |
