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Created on 3-2-08
I'm dropping through ice,
The chills hit my back,
I'm falling I'm falling,
I'm falling off track.
I've lost comprehension,
Lost spirits lost gain,
Lost all sense of knowing,
I'm going insane.
These people I've wanted,
These people I need,
I don't think, I don't know,
What they feel about me.
All apprehension,
It reaches throughout,
It singes, it burns,
It stretches I shout.
I'm falling through darkness,
I'm losing myself,
I want them, I need them,
I need someone else...
The chills hit my back,
I'm falling I'm falling,
I'm falling off track.
I've lost comprehension,
Lost spirits lost gain,
Lost all sense of knowing,
I'm going insane.
These people I've wanted,
These people I need,
I don't think, I don't know,
What they feel about me.
All apprehension,
It reaches throughout,
It singes, it burns,
It stretches I shout.
I'm falling through darkness,
I'm losing myself,
I want them, I need them,
I need someone else...
Please Login to post comments| On July 12th 2008 Akinka Said : | |
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Wow, I love it... The feeling is so raw, so real... So easy to understand! Really wonderful! |
| On July 12th 2008 101091 Said : | |
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Wow, I love this one. It really draws it's reader in and captivates them. This is really good, I love the frustration it shows along with the plea of needing someone at the end. |
| On May 1st 2008 elmolover2955 Said : | |
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wow, thats really good |
| On March 3rd 2008 Xpoetxgurlx Said : | |
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oh wow. this is AMAZING! i LOOOOOVE it!!! great job jeff :D |
