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Confusion
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Created on 10-29-07
Every thing's confusing,
Not a thing makes sense,
Even things I seem to say,
My feelings all condense.
People all around me,
Say thats how it's been,
Don't remember things this way,
Did I lose myself within?
Following my mind,
It isn't working out,
All the arrows point their ways,
Which one's the proper route?
Wish someone would guide me,
Drag me through this mess,
Bring me from confusion,
So that I could be less stressed.
Not a thing makes sense,
Even things I seem to say,
My feelings all condense.
People all around me,
Say thats how it's been,
Don't remember things this way,
Did I lose myself within?
Following my mind,
It isn't working out,
All the arrows point their ways,
Which one's the proper route?
Wish someone would guide me,
Drag me through this mess,
Bring me from confusion,
So that I could be less stressed.
Please Login to post comments| On November 25th 2007 California1516 Said : | |
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me likey :) |
| On October 29th 2007 undiie Said : | |
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Great one Jeff! =] |
| On October 29th 2007 pinklilbabe08 Said : | |
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this shit is amazing ok i totaly understand wat ur talking about. i have found some one to help me out and i hope and pray you find your way! Things get beter!! |
| On October 29th 2007 leglessrich Said : | |
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emotastic |
| On October 29th 2007 comacozi101 Said : | |
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this is awesome |
| On October 29th 2007 Xpoetxgurlx Said : | |
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im trying to vote more but it wont let me!! o.O
teehee |
| On October 29th 2007 Xpoetxgurlx Said : | |
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this one is AMAZINGLY AWESOME too :D
u really have an amazing talent for writting.... :D
Keep it up :DDDD |
| On October 29th 2007 alienz13 Said : | |
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o i like it |
| On October 29th 2007 101091 Said : | |
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WOW! I love it. This one really fits how I'm feeling right now. I love the last two lines. You really did a great job with this one. |
