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Emotions in a bottle

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My love, it comes in a bottle,
Something that often gives glee,
The few girls that manage giving it too,
We start out happily.

My happiness comes in a bottle,
That can only be bought by my friends,
You can't just buy it from grocery stores,
When the feelings, they reach their ends.

My sadness comes in a bottle,
Something that many can buy,
When someone gives this bottle to me,
It makes me want to cry.

My anger comes in a bottle,
Something that's hard to find,
It can only be brought by my enemies,
Who's bones I want to grind.
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On August 5th 2008 UnSane420 Said :
UnSane420 this is amazing i love this one its beautifully written!!!
On September 28th 2007 FruitPunch15 Said :
FruitPunch15 I ABSOLUTELY LOVE IT...you my good sir are brilliant....
On August 25th 2007 Tigga16 Said :
Tigga16 I love it!!!
On August 24th 2007 lovveMe1127 Said :
lovveMe1127 i love this =D
On August 22nd 2007 emoxMCRx4ever Said :
emoxMCRx4ever Oh wow! I can really feel the emotions in this one!!!!!!!!! Great work!!!!!!!
On August 21st 2007 tswieberg Said :
tswieberg This is different, unique. I like it.
On August 21st 2007 Jeff1315 Said :
Jeff1315 I just meant like finding it... not realllllly buying it ya know?
On August 21st 2007 midnitemurder Said :
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sorry i bit dislexic or wutever so i thought it said battle. lol!
On August 21st 2007 midnitemurder Said :
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???? how's dat bout battle? and wut's da bottle 4? i confused!
On August 20th 2007 DorkyBoo08 Said :
DorkyBoo08 whoa this is really good peom.
On August 20th 2007 California1516 Said :
California1516 woah..this is good! love the bottle references..and the emotion for each para. wow..nice writing skilz
On August 20th 2007 101091 Said :
101091 Love it. It's so good.
On August 20th 2007 undiie Said :
undiie I kind of agree with Pang, I think.. Really good poem, though. =]
On August 20th 2007 PoeticPang Said :
PoeticPang oooohmmf,, wow,, 'mazing lines,, so fluid,, wonderful job here,, ,, but,, ehm.. hmmm? why would u need to buy friends or love? it's not possible,, , i like the metaphor and thoughts behind it,, altho i'm not so sure about the grocery part and buying people(bottles),, lol,, oh of course,, unless they're whores or such,, ^o^ then that's a whole different topic,, u should really think about what the reader is gonna find the meanings in,, seriously,, ,soooo misleading behind true meanings ^___^,, great job tho!~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Pang
On August 20th 2007 Xpoetxgurlx Said :
Xpoetxgurlx =D