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Emotions in a bottle
My love, it comes in a bottle,
Something that often gives glee,
The few girls that manage giving it too,
We start out happily.
My happiness comes in a bottle,
That can only be bought by my friends,
You can't just buy it from grocery stores,
When the feelings, they reach their ends.
My sadness comes in a bottle,
Something that many can buy,
When someone gives this bottle to me,
It makes me want to cry.
My anger comes in a bottle,
Something that's hard to find,
It can only be brought by my enemies,
Who's bones I want to grind.
Something that often gives glee,
The few girls that manage giving it too,
We start out happily.
My happiness comes in a bottle,
That can only be bought by my friends,
You can't just buy it from grocery stores,
When the feelings, they reach their ends.
My sadness comes in a bottle,
Something that many can buy,
When someone gives this bottle to me,
It makes me want to cry.
My anger comes in a bottle,
Something that's hard to find,
It can only be brought by my enemies,
Who's bones I want to grind.
| On August 5th 2008 UnSane420 Said : | |
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this is amazing i love this one its beautifully written!!! |
| On September 28th 2007 FruitPunch15 Said : | |
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I ABSOLUTELY LOVE IT...you my good sir are brilliant.... |
| On August 25th 2007 Tigga16 Said : | |
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I love it!!! |
| On August 24th 2007 lovveMe1127 Said : | |
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i love this =D |
| On August 22nd 2007 emoxMCRx4ever Said : | |
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Oh wow! I can really feel the emotions in this one!!!!!!!!! Great work!!!!!!! |
| On August 21st 2007 tswieberg Said : | |
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This is different, unique. I like it. |
| On August 21st 2007 Jeff1315 Said : | |
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I just meant like finding it... not realllllly buying it ya know? |
| On August 21st 2007 midnitemurder Said : | |
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sorry i bit dislexic or wutever so i thought it said battle. lol! |
| On August 21st 2007 midnitemurder Said : | |
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???? how's dat bout battle? and wut's da bottle 4? i confused! |
| On August 20th 2007 DorkyBoo08 Said : | |
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whoa this is really good peom. |
| On August 20th 2007 California1516 Said : | |
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woah..this is good! love the bottle references..and the emotion for each para. wow..nice writing skilz |
| On August 20th 2007 101091 Said : | |
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Love it. It's so good. |
| On August 20th 2007 undiie Said : | |
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I kind of agree with Pang, I think.. Really good poem, though. =] |
| On August 20th 2007 PoeticPang Said : | |
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oooohmmf,, wow,, 'mazing lines,, so fluid,, wonderful job here,, ,, but,, ehm.. hmmm? why would u need to buy friends or love? it's not possible,, , i like the metaphor and thoughts behind it,, altho i'm not so sure about the grocery part and buying people(bottles),, lol,, oh of course,, unless they're whores or such,, ^o^ then that's a whole different topic,, u should really think about what the reader is gonna find the meanings in,, seriously,, ,soooo misleading behind true meanings ^___^,, great job tho!~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Pang |
| On August 20th 2007 Xpoetxgurlx Said : | |
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=D |


