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To my best friend Zach that moved away

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Best Buddies

Views (240) Anger Created on 8-6-07 Flag
I miss all our memories,
All of those things,
We did together,
Happiness sings,

I miss all the 'good times',
Day upon day,
We had together,
Our own special way,

I miss everything,
About us, you know,
I miss all the fun,
And I want to show.

I miss you my friend,
The happiness brought,
I miss it all,
Even times that we fought.

I want you to know,
I want you to stay,
Forever best friend,
Lets go out and 'play'.
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On August 8th 2007 mcihellejane Said :
mcihellejane I really like this one..It is simple, yet it is emotional. It flowed well and sounded great. Nice job!
On August 7th 2007 joabizz Said :
joabizz what a good friend you are...very nice... :)
On August 7th 2007 jarnotti Said :
jarnotti very good job like always keep writing :)
On August 6th 2007 California1516 Said :
California1516 last para. was the best..it didnt flow as well as ur others..thats not necessarily a bad thing..cuz i think u put ur emotions into it..which makes it count.. i also like the line...happiness sings..
On August 6th 2007 undiie Said :
undiie Good poem. =]
On August 6th 2007 cjaskot Said :
cjaskot awww, why'd you have to move away zach? very nice poem though jeff =)