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To my best friend Zach that moved awayRate this Poem
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Best Buddies
I miss all our memories,
All of those things,
We did together,
Happiness sings,
I miss all the 'good times',
Day upon day,
We had together,
Our own special way,
I miss everything,
About us, you know,
I miss all the fun,
And I want to show.
I miss you my friend,
The happiness brought,
I miss it all,
Even times that we fought.
I want you to know,
I want you to stay,
Forever best friend,
Lets go out and 'play'.
All of those things,
We did together,
Happiness sings,
I miss all the 'good times',
Day upon day,
We had together,
Our own special way,
I miss everything,
About us, you know,
I miss all the fun,
And I want to show.
I miss you my friend,
The happiness brought,
I miss it all,
Even times that we fought.
I want you to know,
I want you to stay,
Forever best friend,
Lets go out and 'play'.
| On August 8th 2007 mcihellejane Said : | |
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I really like this one..It is simple, yet it is emotional. It flowed well and sounded great. Nice job! |
| On August 7th 2007 joabizz Said : | |
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what a good friend you are...very nice... :) |
| On August 7th 2007 jarnotti Said : | |
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very good job like always keep writing :) |
| On August 6th 2007 California1516 Said : | |
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last para. was the best..it didnt flow as well as ur others..thats not necessarily a bad thing..cuz i think u put ur emotions into it..which makes it count.. i also like the line...happiness sings.. |
| On August 6th 2007 undiie Said : | |
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Good poem. =] |
| On August 6th 2007 cjaskot Said : | |
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awww, why'd you have to move away zach? very nice poem though jeff =) |


