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All About Her... =]

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I looked at her,
She looked at me,
I looked around,
Just to see,
No one was watching,
No one would care,
I looked at her,
I could only stare,
I gazed at her eyes,
She didn't see,
Then later she asked,
"Why look at me"
I had to explain,
I liked her a lot,
I had to explain,
Shes all I've got,
"Why do you like me?"
She says as we talk,
I explain once again
She's all that I've got,
"Why do you love me?"
She asked me today,
"Must I explain,
Right here, in this rain?"
She said yes you do,
And smiled at me,
I looked up at her,
And started to think,
"When we both talk,
I get butterflies,
When we don't talk,
They flutter; then die,
I think about you,
When you're not here,
Down from my eye,
Runs a single tear,
I miss you so much,
Every day,
I miss you so much,
In a strange sort of way,
Different from anything,
I've ever felt,
Different from anyone"
I bent over and knelt,
I continued my story,
Then looked up at her,
"You make me feel special,
It's hard to render...
When you talk,
You are all that I hear,
When I see you,
You're all that is near,
You are my world,
I need you so much,
You make me feel,
So great, when we touch."
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On July 28th 2007 cjaskot Said :
cjaskot aww, its great =) plus its written on my birthday =)
On July 25th 2007 transgenic Said :
transgenic That is so beautiful and so sweet!!
On July 24th 2007 jarnotti Said :
jarnotti wow you always write so much good poems keep it up
On July 24th 2007 cursedxisxwhat Said :
cursedxisxwhat dang. she got to it before me lol!
but it is very good.
keep it up!
On July 24th 2007 undiie Said :
undiie Its great. I like it. But its not really in a style that I like. =]
On July 24th 2007 Xpoetxgurlx Said :
Xpoetxgurlx this is just b-e-a-u-tiful!!! i love every word ^.^