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Daddy Died
Each day, I miss my dad.
Mama and I, are so sad.
Why Dad, did you have to die?
The day you died, i didn't even cry.
I was two years old, expecting you back.
I was looking out the window, in the pitch black.
You were comming home, but this time late.
Comming home, you weren't driving straight.
Why dad, did you forget your seat-belt?
You'd be here, with no pain to be dealt.
Why dad, didn't you stop and rest?
You were tired, it would've been the best.
Dad, you fell asleep, that's not a thrill.
Why did you have to crash, on-top of that hill?
The window, you crashed though it.
Down you fell and the ground you hit.
Although you died, without any pain.
Sorrow was spilt, just like rain.
To this day, no happy memories are present.
To have no memory of you, its not pleasent.
Why dad, why are you not here?
It's like you were never, once so near.
I wish this, that I could remember your voice.
Dad, I question, did you leave with no choice?
Was it in God's plan, that you died that day.
So I wouldn't have a dad, so you could be away?
I've see many a child, playing with their dad.
But I've hadn't a childhood, like they have had.
Daddy, I feel this shouldn't be true.
That your son, will always miss you.
| On July 30th 2007 jesusfreakaka Said : | |
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That is so sad! Your making me depressed! well, good poem! Kudo's!!! |
| On June 25th 2007 MiekiCharles Said : | |
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This is a good poem...but sad... |
| On June 23rd 2007 johntyrel Said : | |
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hey lil bro.. .thanks for commenting on my stuff.. my dad moved away when i was 7.. i knew and loved my father dearly then.. he was gone.. thankfully only for 6 years..i feel the pain in this poem... in fact... even now that i have my dad back, i still feel it now and then... thanks for writing this |
| On June 18th 2007 BeebzYep Said : | |
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thats very sad and i am sry for whatever pain and feelings you had to go through without him |
| On May 5th 2007 rokmisox26 Said : | |
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thats sad... im sorry |
| On May 5th 2007 xxdeligirlxx Said : | |
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Its a pity you didnt get to know your dad, my mum died when i was 18, and i felt cheated. When i read this, it made me see that i was one of the lucky ones. You will meet him again another day! |
| On April 17th 2007 mibabyamigo Said : | |
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I kno how you feel mi dad died 4 years ago!!! |
| On April 17th 2007 Jarrettsdance Said : | |
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oh, i'm sorry for you and your son's loss, you'll be in my prayers |
| On April 17th 2007 CHRISTANJAY1 Said : | |
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wow this hit really close to home my son lost his father due to him falling asleep behind the wheel i am sorry my son is only two now and i know that he will be feeling the same way as you take care and keep your head up high your father would be proud !!!! |
| On April 17th 2007 MikkiWise16 Said : | |
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im sorry... |
| On April 17th 2007 sexything2006 Said : | |
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omg. wow. that hit hard. when i read that |
| On April 17th 2007 Ametyl Said : | |
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wow
very thought provoking
your dad will be proud |
| On April 17th 2007 Imgayasfuck Said : | |
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omg that is a good poem bra...and i kno how u feel cuz both of mine died my mom was sick and my dad got into a car accident and now i live with my aunt and uncle but i will always keep u in my prayers!!! |
| On April 16th 2007 LovesVictim913 Said : | |
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wow. this is really good. very touching, im sorry if this is a poem about your life, i know how you feel. but the poem is great! |
| On April 16th 2007 lonely81wildca Said : | |
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I love your poem. It kind of reminds me of what I am going through with my husband... thanks |
| On April 16th 2007 LySsAjAnElL Said : | |
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That was really, really good. very sad but very good. I am so sorry for what happened to your dad. That would be hard but remember God has a plan for you, he has one for everyone.
Great poem =] |
| On April 16th 2007 lilshortlinski Said : | |
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wow i liked it, i can kinda relate to it, both my dads are not apart of my life right now in time, i dont live with my real dad, and my stepdad is over in iraq so yeh but its good!! |
| On April 16th 2007 lilshortlinski Said : | |
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wow i liked it, i can kinda relate to it, both my dads are not apart of my life right now in time, i dont live with my real dad, and my stepdad is over in iraq so yeh but its good!! |
| On April 15th 2007 cooly10 Said : | |
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sigh
that made me cry |
| On April 15th 2007 natajsha715 Said : | |
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Good poem, you should check out my poem title Mother, its about my mom....Keep the pen moving |
| On April 15th 2007 Cassi00 Said : | |
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omg this made me cry... i can relate to this but yea, i am really srry. ur very strong willed person and i have feeling u will become better because all the bad and sad times in life make u a stronger person. |
| On April 15th 2007 gigglehottie Said : | |
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ohhh, thats so heart touching, |
| On April 15th 2007 evil333psycho Said : | |
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hummmm ... this song was deep and i like it but i couldnt truely feel ru pain beacuase i have issues with my father but i believe that yours wouldnt of been as bad as mine but ummm i hope you feel better and i reLLY LIKE THIS POEM!!! i hope to read more someday ... bye |
| On April 15th 2007 Scrapper9494 Said : | |
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this was such a sad poem....it touched my heart. |
| On April 15th 2007 Jarrettsdance Said : | |
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Mom would tell me that when i was little, i'd always go to the window looking for my dad's truck saying "da da da da da?" over and over again, i have pics of me to doing that. |


