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The Lonely Boy |
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What is Love? |
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Words of Pain |
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This Feeling I Have... |
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Be Careful With My Heart |
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Forever Waiting |
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Decisions |
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Describing Her |
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Jedi Jarrett |
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Daddy Died |
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GUITAR HERO |
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I Tried... |
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My First And Only Love |
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The One Night Stand |
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Lo Spoiled Needs |
Broken Chains of my Disaster
Broken chains of my disaster
Hatred, loathing, unleashed from cage
The needles of pain, thrown faster, faster
Here am I, suffering your rage
Your words, only trapped inside your precious lips
No lightning to cause the thunder strike
Your eyes, a storm of hatred, lightning rips
Through my eyes, you take your mocking hike
I’m left here, not knowing your reason
You give me, that frost, bitten shoulder.
My heart, cold, just as the winter season.
My soul is left here, growing colder and colder
My world starts spinning, as I see you striding
That reminding glare, my mind was blasting
What is wrong, what are you hiding?
The first ten seconds of your flight, was ever lasting
We once laughed, I’d see the sparkle in your eyes
Your sweet smile, made my day ablaze
I liked you, I didn’t tell, thought it was wise.
But now that memoir of us, is just a haze.
Though it's been months, I still think of you
But the way you hurt me, I wish it weren’t true.
| On November 27th 2007 xxxAngelicaxxx Said : | |
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really good. i love it |
| On November 27th 2007 mrskritter Said : | |
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wonderful work |
| On November 26th 2007 transgenic Said : | |
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Love it! Great rhythm and word choice! Love the emotion, too! |
| On November 26th 2007 emily28793 Said : | |
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luv it |
| On November 26th 2007 LanieGBball93 Said : | |
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wow good job |
| On November 26th 2007 Jarrettsdance Said : | |
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had to repost this |


