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R.I.P That 11 Year Old We ALL Miss.

Views (348) Pain Created on 5-23-08 Flag

I grab a gun hold it to my heart and scream your name

Pull the trigger I'm to blame

Lying there black and blue

Dying so young

It's a lie, I NEVER loved you 

Maybe it's because your no longer here

The answer is what I fear

But one things clear

We miss you

We want you here

It's been two years.

This is for my ex-boyfriend in primary school. He died of cancer when he was only 11 years old. Tomorrow Saturday 24th May 2008 it will be the two year mark of which he has been gone. I just want him to know me nor anybody else is going to forget him. It's not easy to forget about someone you loved  and cared about, I've tried to be strong for you, but knowing your just not here anymore make me break. Sorry, We miss you, We love you

 R.I.P Charlie

1993 - 2006

xxxx

 

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On September 3rd 2008 Dragonbourne Said :
Dragonbourne sorry for your loss alot of your insperation comes from pain and your poetry is amazing
On June 28th 2008 Andy2Anomaly Said :
Andy2Anomaly Wow it sucks to lose someone you love. I'm sorry for your loss.
On May 25th 2008 JamiiCage Said :
JamiiCage Firstly jseekanarchist i never said i should commit suicide, that is just pathetic. I would never do that and anyway its just a poem, Well if you think i should post this and you dont wanan read it then dont. That's a simplpe answer tbh. & yea it was a typo 13
On May 25th 2008 TheBranster Said :
TheBranster not sure if this a typo, but says from 93 to 06. and, in title, and in poem, says died at 11. doesent make sense to me. ignoring that, sorry for your loss. hope you've gotten much better. hope you relise to let the past be in the past, and look for a brighter future.
On May 24th 2008 jseekanarchist Said :
jseekanarchist that sucks, but you know, not everyone is looking to be depressed. if you want to write it, put it in your journal or something. or put somthing like that in a school blog in myspace where people know him. and i dont find people pointing guns at their chests somthing i want to read. thats your problem. i have lost many people too. it sucks i know, but saying "maybe i should commit suicide" isnt a good way to get attention. just something to think about
On May 24th 2008 JamiiCage Said :
JamiiCage looking for entertainment? Yea okay if you want entertainment go and leave a shitty comment like that on somebody elses poem. I wanted peope to read it that is why i put it on here.
On May 23rd 2008 MileyCyrus10 Said :
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i'm sorry that he died and u have a right to cry and about what i said up there sorry i was looking 4 entertainment
On May 23rd 2008 MileyCyrus10 Said :
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it's sad that he died or whatever but there is no use putting it on yestriffic.com. lo.