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I hate you
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Created on 1-18-08
Listening to ther rain,
Noone's around,
Trying to numb the pain.
I don't care If I'm never found,
losing my paitents,
Who could ever wait this long for you?
Cause I hate you,
Just go away,
Who needs you?
Your always gone,
and I'm alone,
Yeah, I hate you!
Some say Hate is a strong word,
but theres no other word strong enough to describe my feelings...
You can jump off a bridge,
For all I care,
You curse and cry,
For all I care,
You can go on and forget,
everying like I am,
everything...
I hate you!
Who needs you!
Who want's you?
I hate you...
Please Login to post comments| On January 22nd 2008 numba1chic Said : | |
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i love how strongly you express ur anger in this one |
| On January 21st 2008 kaykaypunk Said : | |
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great poem i understand the pain of this one |
| On January 19th 2008 AKristine1976 Said : | |
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i feel it 2 |
| On January 19th 2008 emily28793 Said : | |
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wow powerfull emotions !! |
| On January 18th 2008 fallenXx420 Said : | |
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really good...and well written. i like it a alot |
| On January 18th 2008 Foreverlyn Said : | |
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sometimes hate is not the word, but of course feelings hurt, but more over in your mind, you keep asking the why of things. |
| On January 18th 2008 schisminme Said : | |
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Some say the lines blur between feelings in poetry. The whole "action" is lacking, it's more a static hate. But I like it. |
| On January 18th 2008 aj10023 Said : | |
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Very good! |
| On January 18th 2008 jessicapoth88 Said : | |
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i can also relate to this it is so me |
| On January 18th 2008 datsexyemogurl Said : | |
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omg i love this ican so relate
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