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About a girl who is depressedRate this Poem
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Hope Back
She sneaks into her room,
After another long day,
Knowing noone is home,
She thinks crying is okay...
She lays her head donw.
Andother restless night,
She cries with no sound,
Cause nothing's going right.
Her famoly thinks she's fine,
They don't see through her smile,
They never try to cross the line,
That's inside and on it the hurt starts to pile.
She smiles as you walk by,
But once you back is turned,
Her insides start to cry,
Ans she wonders if they'll learn,
Of her secrets and pain.
At school she acts fine and all,
BUT it's only an act,
At night she silently calls,
For hope to come back.
So she lives her life,
In silent prayer,
She wonders if anyone even cares...
| On January 22nd 2008 numba1chic Said : | |
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i liked this alot... i know alot of ppl can relate to it including me and thats a very important part of poetry |
| On January 21st 2008 fallenXx420 Said : | |
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i like it.. the flow is good. keep writing!!! |
| On January 21st 2008 kaykaypunk Said : | |
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thats really good and sorta how i feel |
| On January 9th 2008 Trena09 Said : | |
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i really like this... great poems! |
| On January 1st 2008 DeathMetalPunk Said : | |
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ooh cry me freaking a river. It's called teen angst. It's so freaking common it's amazing. When is someone going to come up with something new? What do you have to be sad about? Your boyfriend break up with you? No one gets you? You have fake friends? Your parents tell you what to do? You live in the wealthiest country in the world, yet you still find the time to whine about how nothing's right? But other than that, good poem, good flow. (seriously, no sarcasm) |
| On December 30th 2007 kashaena123 Said : | |
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wow! I like this. |
| On December 30th 2007 babygirlbri321 Said : | |
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wow this is really good!i completely relate.......
well written i love it! |
| On December 30th 2007 Dannichik Said : | |
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omg that is the nicest thing ive heard that touched my heart and made me feel about all the depressed kids out there:( |
| On December 30th 2007 transgenic Said : | |
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Really heart-felt and great rhythm! |
| On December 30th 2007 mylullaby01 Said : | |
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I like it. It's very good! |
| On December 30th 2007 101091 Said : | |
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I love it. It's so good. I know the feeling all to well. Great job. |
| On December 30th 2007 mistdarklight Said : | |
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that was reli good! i like the way its structured n worded |
| On December 30th 2007 MoOnZoMbIe Said : | |
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it's true for most. my heart goes out for. god, save us all, right?!
good writing though. |
| On December 30th 2007 3wander3 Said : | |
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I really like it. it has good rhyme and its touching. keep writing |


