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Dedicated to my friends mom who passedRate this Poem
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If |
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Forgiveness |
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I Should Have.... |
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This World |
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God's Greatest Creation |
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Escape... |
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The Last Unicorn |
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Put Your Wings On Now
(It's okay baby girl,)
You can put your wings on now,
Sing with a choir of angels,
And fly along with the clouds,
Dance with the stars that dangle.
Then walk in the fields of dreams,
Ride those untamed waves,
Swim with the dolphins so free,
Lay in the sun's eternal rays.
Hold on to God's right hand,
Come run with unbridled horses,
Stand upon the golden sands,
Now wait for me at the arches.
| On September 4th 2008 deadpoet Said : | |
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i like the last stanza the best! |
| On June 24th 2008 max5892 Said : | |
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wow..i realized i have not read this yet...really good...awsome job.. |
| On June 12th 2008 ThisIsTheDay Said : | |
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This is gorgeous. I love it and I can really feel the emotions ablaze in this piece. Brilliant work. It could use tightening, but it might just hinder the feelings..-Lozer™ =] |
| On June 1st 2008 olchii Said : | |
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brilant brilant, i love it, most of the time i dont like ryming pomes but this one was deep and full of thought |
| On April 27th 2008 Moonrage215 Said : | |
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That is wonderful! I really like it!
~Moonrage! |
| On April 26th 2008 taffytoes Said : | |
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ah! wonderful! it just feels a little short... i was expecting one more stanza. :( but i really like it! its great. |
| On April 25th 2008 LuciousGranger Said : | |
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This was deep and full of emotion. I felt the saddness and silent joy you expressed in your words. |
| On April 25th 2008 LuciousGranger Said : | |
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This was deep and full of emotion. I felt the saddness and silent joy you expressed in your words. |


