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Created 10-17-07 in Political ScienceRate this Poem
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This World
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Created on 10-17-07
In This world of chaos and pain
Lies a flower begging for rain
A small bud yearning for light
Instead gets engulfed by night
This world hazed with smoke and fog
Suffocates this flower from knowing love
The tiny pedals stretch towards the sky
As thudering clouds are somewhere nearby
In this world clouded by jealousy and greed
Wilts the pedals from its need
A single pedal is all that remains
In this world of chaos and pain.
Author's Note: There is a hidden meaning behind this poem, some symbolisms see if you can figure it out :D Please rate and comment!!!! THANKS :D :D
Please Login to post comments| On December 22nd 2007 ALEXandMAX Said : | |
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this is amazing!! really awsome...i think i might know what the hidden meaning is but im not quite sure... |
| On October 24th 2007 JWalker2406 Said : | |
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If ya'll are stumped by the meaning and symbolism just message me if you want to know it :D |
| On October 19th 2007 mrskritter Said : | |
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great work not sure of the hidden meaning but will give it some thought |
| On October 18th 2007 Lovelyeyes0 Said : | |
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after smoke and fog, add 'in the atmosphere above. I tripped over the next line cuz of the rhyme stretch. Good poem though, I like it. You can see it means something, but as I said, I'm tired and sick. |
| On October 18th 2007 Lovelyeyes0 Said : | |
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I don't see, it, but it's early. I'll come back and look at it. lol. not feelin good. Gf's lil sis gave me a bug. |
| On October 17th 2007 mypoeticrage Said : | |
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I think it could have many hidden meanings. I like it thumbs up |
| On October 17th 2007 doonbuggy17 Said : | |
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I saw the hidden meaning as soon as I started reading. I won't say for other peoples entertainment. I love the poem. |
