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The Real Thing

Views (28) Pain Created on 5-8-08 Flag

My screams fill the bitter cold air,
For I do not know if I can ever bear,
This tragedy that has suddenly arrived,
Before my scared and petrified eyes.

I hope he will continue to fight
I'm praying that he will be alright,
I don't know if there's any hope,
How could death lie so very close?

I stay with him till help finally comes,
And by then I am completely numb,
With coldness, dread, and tons of fear,
As I silently start to cry some tears.

Why does it have to end like this,
Where there is no peace or any bliss,
I just wish this was all a dream,
But I know it's the real thing.

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On May 9th 2008 xHickChick789x Said :
xHickChick789x wow speechless... nice though :)
On May 9th 2008 smile4evr Said :
smile4evr is this a true story......? its really good either way!
On May 9th 2008 AnimaniacAsh Said :
AnimaniacAsh I could really feel this one (:, good job!