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Fallen Angel.

Views (119) Pain Created on 5-7-08 Flag

Can no one see her?
The tradgicallly fallen soul.
Does no one see the tears?
The ones that take their toll.

Can no one hear the screams?
That pierce her broken mind.
Does no one realize shes fading?
That there will be nothing left to find.

Can no one tell she died?
That days when she was torn.
Does no one know shes unloved?
That when she flies in death, no one will mourn.

The sad truth is that no one does
She is uncared for
But no longer does she weep, that broken angel has
SOARED
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This was written in a very short time, and so I would like to know what you think, please comment and vote.

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On July 5th 2008 JAiDyLeE Said :
JAiDyLeE I love it, Great job.
On July 5th 2008 JAiDyLeE Said :
JAiDyLeE I love it, Great job.
On July 4th 2008 TheKTGirl Said :
TheKTGirl Wow, sounds like something that would fit abortion completely. Just a thought. It was really good; you just need to work on your punctuation but other than that it was written wonderfully
On May 7th 2008 lilangel1213 Said :
lilangel1213 i loved this poem i think it is rilly good
On May 7th 2008 AdamGontier13 Said :
AdamGontier13 i thought you put a lot of passion in it and i instantly realized that you were alone and unloved how sad