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Like the rain |
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Triumph over darkness |
Like the rain
There was a girl who had brown eyes
That in them laid a small spark of surprise
She waits in the corner for the clock to strike
The time had almost reached midnight
The rain outside comes crashing down
She's a lonely girl stuck in a big town
The tears rolled slowley down her face
All she wanted was a little embrace
Nothing seems to have gone her way
She just took it day by day
Outside the rain quickly scatters
Now she thinks nothing matters
She started to walk among the floor
She wanted to be here no more
She wanted and wanted but never got
She thought of all this while knowing not
Of the talent she had deep inside
Where there used to be hope and pride
The neighbors found her lying in the lawn
As the sun rose at the peak of dawn
And like the rain, she is gone
| On June 17th 2008 Thugnastay227 Said: |
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| this is sad. and tells of a fate that befalls many in this globe. well crafted. |
| On June 16th 2008 flashoflight Said: |
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| I very much enjoyed the flow of this... It is a testament to this poem that I left rather speechless, and cannot think of what to say... |
| On June 16th 2008 mcihellejane Said: |
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| Now that was a good write! The smooth flow and rhyme were wonderful. I'm usually not a fan of poems like this, but I have to give you credit--this one was good. Very nice job! |
| On May 12th 2007 iluvtostito Said: |
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| ooo i like this!!! |


