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Created: 04/29 2007
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Category: Fear

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Triumph over darkness

Forevermore

It breaks my soul to watch

My heart grows sick and sore

This sight is too much to bare

Should I shut my eyes forevermore?

Silent screams upon their lips

Dreams of escape stuck in thier eyes

Freedom no longer a privelage

Pleas of hope lost in their soundless cries

Shackles of doom stuck upon thier skin

Dried tears leaving salty streams

Appearance hides the fire inside

Nothing is what nothing seems

Time and time and time again

Broken promises fill the air

It's hard to breathe when i'm surrounded

By the cold touch of despair

Disfigured creatures lurk in the shadows

Condemning them to pain

To watch this scene through my eyes

Will certainly drive me insane

I try to turn away but I can not

My paralyzed body unable to react

But I still see hope's eternal flame

Their belief in this is truely fact

Bile arises in my throat

I weep tears at this destructable sight

The shadows shade the weary bodies

That hover painfully throughout the night

It broke my soul to watch

My heart grew sick and sore

This sight was too much to bare

I shall shut my eyes forevermore

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On June 17th 2008 Thugnastay227 Said: 
Thugnastay227 such is the constant duality of this world. beauty yes. but there are plendy of horrors. the kindk of which most dare not speak of. u know how to draw people into ur writing. a skill few on this site have
On June 16th 2008 mcihellejane Said: 
mcihellejane This one was simply great. Very nice flow and I love the rhyme! You captured the relentless despair perfectly-I felt every word! very nicely done!
On May 4th 2007 DragOnzHeart Said: 
DragOnzHeart Love it...!!!
On May 2nd 2007 TheNamzKate Said: 
TheNamzKate oOo i luv it lauren
On April 29th 2007 becrox Said: 
becrox its amazing!!
On April 29th 2007 iluvtostito Said: 
iluvtostito wow i really really like this one!!! the word that comes to mind is Silhouettes. im not sure why. it just does
On April 29th 2007 bloodredangel7 Said: 
bloodredangel7 it sounds as if your heart cant take the pain it seeing so it wants to stop the sights from flowing
On April 29th 2007 jonlovesashley Said: 
jonlovesashley Love how it flows together!