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My Poems
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Reach out |
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Dream of dreams |
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Absurd |
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Forevermore |
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Like the rain |
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Unaware |
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Triumph over darkness |
Forevermore
It breaks my soul to watch
My heart grows sick and sore
This sight is too much to bare
Should I shut my eyes forevermore?
Silent screams upon their lips
Dreams of escape stuck in thier eyes
Freedom no longer a privelage
Pleas of hope lost in their soundless cries
Shackles of doom stuck upon thier skin
Dried tears leaving salty streams
Appearance hides the fire inside
Nothing is what nothing seems
Time and time and time again
Broken promises fill the air
It's hard to breathe when i'm surrounded
By the cold touch of despair
Disfigured creatures lurk in the shadows
Condemning them to pain
To watch this scene through my eyes
Will certainly drive me insane
I try to turn away but I can not
My paralyzed body unable to react
But I still see hope's eternal flame
Their belief in this is truely fact
Bile arises in my throat
I weep tears at this destructable sight
The shadows shade the weary bodies
That hover painfully throughout the night
It broke my soul to watch
My heart grew sick and sore
This sight was too much to bare
I shall shut my eyes forevermore
| On June 17th 2008 Thugnastay227 Said: |
| On June 16th 2008 mcihellejane Said: |
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| This one was simply great. Very nice flow and I love the rhyme! You captured the relentless despair perfectly-I felt every word! very nicely done! |
| On May 4th 2007 DragOnzHeart Said: |
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| Love it...!!! |
| On May 2nd 2007 TheNamzKate Said: |
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| oOo i luv it lauren |
| On April 29th 2007 becrox Said: |
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| its amazing!! |
| On April 29th 2007 iluvtostito Said: |
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| wow i really really like this one!!! the word that comes to mind is Silhouettes. im not sure why. it just does |
| On April 29th 2007 bloodredangel7 Said: |
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| it sounds as if your heart cant take the pain it seeing so it wants to stop the sights from flowing |
| On April 29th 2007 jonlovesashley Said: |
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| Love how it flows together! |


