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I Keep Tripping Over You

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Of all the things i've overcame
Of all the mountains i've climbed
And wild fires i've tamed
Of all the suffering and pained i've endured combined
I stumble constantly over the same stone
It feels as if in circles my life leads
Rock hard enough to feel through skin to bone
Edges sharp enough to cause me to bleed
How is it possible to continuously fumble over this pebble?
So blind i must be to not notice before i reach this obstruction
How can it knock me down, over and over into rubble?
So naive i must be to have yet found its destruction
Of all the things i've overcame
I stumble constantly over the same stone
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On March 19th 2008 KellzerBellzer Said :
KellzerBellzer omg... it's amazing!! i love it!! i can totally relate...sadly... fantastic job! ^-^
On March 7th 2008 ALIESAM21 Said :
ALIESAM21 cool! :)
On February 18th 2008 rockerfew Said :
rockerfew nice work. and you say my poems are good? you make me sound like an amatuer lol
On February 18th 2008 oz10norrid Said :
oz10norrid wow...yet again awesome images
On February 18th 2008 lisaljb Said :
lisaljb Wow, this is great, well done!
On February 17th 2008 seekerovtruth Said :
seekerovtruth I came back for seconds on this one. I was telling a friend about it, so it must have really made an impression on me. This is one of my favorites!!!
On February 17th 2008 TIESLAU Said :
TIESLAU Ooo. I like this one. I can relate.
On February 16th 2008 tarahleigh Said :
tarahleigh i like this so much.
On February 16th 2008 amptone Said :
amptone Very nice work doll!
On February 15th 2008 cheerwine14352 Said :
cheerwine14352 wow this is really good. You are really good at writing
On February 14th 2008 coltaw Said :
coltaw Very nice. Your use of metaphors is impressive.
On February 14th 2008 locachoclate Said :
locachoclate i love i reaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaally doo
On February 13th 2008 seekerovtruth Said :
seekerovtruth Ain't it the way! Huge things we overcome with ease. It's those nagging little pebbles that seems to trip us up. I loved it!!!
On February 13th 2008 numba1chic Said :
numba1chic wow, i love it, you already got me hooked on your poems. nice
On February 12th 2008 joabizz Said :
joabizz I have been there a many of times,,, I think we all have, it's *human nature* great job..
On February 12th 2008 charissa14 Said :
charissa14 wow ... again ... i love it
On February 12th 2008 chayeah22 Said :
chayeah22 hmmmm...I have no idea what to say besides "I love it!"
On February 12th 2008 mackenzie3893 Said :
mackenzie3893 I like it. Very...Different. but still very good and i love it.
On February 12th 2008 WinterSeraphim Said :
my picture
i like it a lot, it just seems a little different from a regular poem on this subject. A little more mature maybe?? I'm not exactly sure but its good