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Inspired by a song..Feb.4.08Rate this Poem
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I Lost A Lovely Creature..
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Created on 2-10-08
A lovely creature i did see
Beautiful and alone
I asked if she'd accompany me
She said yes and we walked towards home
We walked out into an ominous sky
Through town and beach shores
That night the sky did cry
Angry winds let out moans and roars
Over mountains, over hills
This wild stalking storm followed
Diabolical images sent our bodies chills
Over time, this lovely creature, the theiving earth must have swallowed
The storm's guiding light was its best feature
Wen i reached home, to my dismay i did see
That i had lost This lovely creature
Se was no longer standing next to me
Please Login to post comments| On March 7th 2008 ALIESAM21 Said : | |
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sad! deep! I'm sad! but not from your poem!!! it was very good! |
| On March 6th 2008 mackenzie3893 Said : | |
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I love this one.
One of your best I think. |
| On February 18th 2008 lisaljb Said : | |
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hmmm, this is rather beautiful, indeed! |
| On February 13th 2008 chayeah22 Said : | |
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It reminded me of "Annabelle Lee" too. I loved it! |
| On February 12th 2008 joabizz Said : | |
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very nice,, you write with such maturity!! I love your work.. |
| On February 12th 2008 fleainfested77 Said : | |
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remember when you told me, that i always say a poems good, but you wanted me to call it perfect
and then i said to you that i dont really ever call anything perfect
well this one is, i really like it, one of your best |
| On February 11th 2008 Trena09 Said : | |
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great job... I love it!!!! |
| On February 11th 2008 charissa14 Said : | |
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wow ... u hav so much talent ... idk if u like to read or not but this poem reminds me of the Pellinor Book Series a lot .... they are the second best book series i have evr read ^_^ |
| On February 11th 2008 coltaw Said : | |
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This reminds me of "Annabelle Lee" on of my alltime favorites so that is a good thing :D Has a very unique feel to it, I love this poem. |
| On February 10th 2008 pinkheffalump Said : | |
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i LOVE the third stanzaaaa!! WOOO nice job!!!*applaud applaud. [: |
| On February 10th 2008 jeff2625 Said : | |
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great job on ur new poems..I realllyyyyy loved them...keep them coming...xxxooo |
| On February 10th 2008 eldestgoddess Said : | |
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I love this one as well, your have such a great talent. |
| On February 10th 2008 transgenic Said : | |
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Beautiful! |
| On February 10th 2008 seekerovtruth Said : | |
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To me this screams guardian angel. Not sure if that was your intent but that's what I got out of it. :) |
