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a color poem...Jan.10.08Rate this Poem
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What is red?
Red is the color of a love candle
It's the color in the middle of a flame
It's too hot to handle
It's too firey to tame
Red is as delicious as a cherry
It's ripe apples
It makes many people merry
It's carrying the sweetest fruits by the sack fulls
Red is the color of a rising welt
The color of blood, fresh and warm
It's the color of pain felt
The color of flesh torn
Red is the color of passion
The color of your cheeks when you blush
Its the color of compassion
It's the color of your new hearts crus
Red is the color of a bouquet of valentine's day roses
The color of a sparkling Rubie
Its the color of a smile a happy mouth poses
The ambers of a rekindled fire to be
| On March 5th 2008 livingxliife91 Said : | |
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GOOD=D |
| On March 5th 2008 livingxliife91 Said : | |
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GOOD=D |
| On March 4th 2008 ALIESAM21 Said : | |
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wow, this is good! thanks for the comments btw. :) sorry it took so long i've been off for about a month! but now i'm back! |
| On February 23rd 2008 NeuroticErin Said : | |
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Wonderful work. |
| On February 19th 2008 ninjane Said : | |
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red is my favorite color...good poem |
| On February 19th 2008 ninjane Said : | |
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red is my favorite color...good poem |
| On February 12th 2008 joabizz Said : | |
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haha June, you are funny!! yes I love red, red to the very bone.... |
| On February 12th 2008 fleainfested77 Said : | |
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this is a good color poem, you doing another? |
| On February 12th 2008 chayeah22 Said : | |
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:) Haven't seen your work in a while or have I just not been looking? I loved it! |
| On February 11th 2008 charissa14 Said : | |
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^_^ i love it |
| On February 11th 2008 HumanF17TH Said : | |
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oops i made a spelling error in stanza four (the last word) crush** sorry! |
| On February 11th 2008 coltaw Said : | |
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The application of the color to a wide range of objects and emotions is pretty clever. This is truly the mind of a poet, finding such meaning in things thought meaningless to others. Great job |
| On February 10th 2008 pinkheffalump Said : | |
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red is totally defined in this. AWESOME! |
| On February 10th 2008 TaraJudexox Said : | |
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i hate the color red but this describes it well. |
| On February 10th 2008 TIESLAU Said : | |
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Makes me wonder. I like it!! |
| On February 10th 2008 jeff2625 Said : | |
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love it...it's very different... |
| On February 10th 2008 eldestgoddess Said : | |
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It was awesome and unique, Love it. |
| On February 10th 2008 transgenic Said : | |
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Unique idea. I love it! |
| On February 10th 2008 seekerovtruth Said : | |
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I am REDiscovering your RED-hot talents and give you cREDit on your incREDible cREDulous REDolent and lack of REDundancy. haha It's early and I am silly :) No need to REDo nor REDesign this one. hehe |


