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Mother, Remember Me?
Hello Mother,
Im writing to tell you that Im okay
That Ive been doing alright since you sent me away
My room here is alright, A little cramped but swell
How have you been doing since we said farewell?
They don't think Im crazy here, Im understood
They've lowered my medication since Ive been doing good
Everyday theres clean sheets and pillows on my bed
And during free time I couldn't tell you how much Ive written and read
I cant go outside or watch as much TV as i used to
Even though it's not that bad here I cant wait til its through
A bit more time and I'll be legal
I'll be free to go, I'll fly out the door like an eagle
Its been so long since we've spoken,
Since Ive been in this place
This is the last time I'll bother you again,
I'll leave your life for good and leave no trace
Ive always just wanted to know,
Do I ever cross your mind?
Do you miss me?
You're all I think about,
and mostly when i go to sleep and dream youre all I see
Well, I just wanted to write you to let you know Im ok
And that Ive been doing alright since you've sent me away
A little letter to hopefully ease your mind
And maybe ,for me, you'll find
The love that you once had inside
| On January 16th 2009 LittlKiraDemon Said: |
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| This made me cry T_T |
| On September 13th 2008 brc93 Said: |
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| I love it!!!!!!! It's really deep and I can totally understand. |
| On February 29th 2008 McRrOxMySoX8 Said: |
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| This one is really deep. Really good though! |
| On February 20th 2008 jwoody1980 Said: |
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| i can feel your pain in the writing its good |
| On February 15th 2008 cheerwine14352 Said: |
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| wow this is my favorite so far |
| On February 13th 2008 numba1chic Said: |
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| this is my favorite so far, i love how personal it is.... your a terrific writer |
| On February 1st 2008 seekerovtruth Said: |
| On January 29th 2008 jeff2625 Said: |
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| nice job..very good poem...loved how you expressed your feelings in it..keep writing... |
| On January 20th 2008 TIESLAU Said: |
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| WOW!!! Lots of feelings in that one! I loved it!!! |
| On January 19th 2008 xxxAngelicaxxx Said: |
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| really good. probably one of my favorites. |
| On January 17th 2008 imagae Said: |
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| Been there. |
| On January 11th 2008 DarkSide1477 Said: |
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| wow its kinda depressing =( but its still a great poem i like it |
| On January 10th 2008 joabizz Said: |
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| wow,,, this is so sad, but so well written,, |
| On January 9th 2008 ALIESAM21 Said: |
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| I have been in a psyciatric institution so I know about being crazy! |
| On January 8th 2008 pinkheffalump Said: |
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| this has a sad tone to it, like the mother is a bit messed up lady to send a perfecctly good child away... |
| On January 8th 2008 fleainfested77 Said: |
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| you know i liked this one a lot, it reminds me of what happened when my mom put me in the hospital, kinda . now this ones my favorite haha |
| On January 7th 2008 mackenzie3893 Said: |
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| Amazing.! i love it.
super great. |
| On January 7th 2008 coltaw Said: |
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| AWESOME. I really like this one. You get a clear image when you read it. This alone shows you that this is a well written poem. Very nice |
| On January 7th 2008 kmk5487 Said: |
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| once again .... wow!!! |
| On January 7th 2008 ellies15 Said: |
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| :'( i love it very much |


