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11/27/07 Triolet PoemRate this Poem
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Created:
01/07 2008
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Dear Friend
Dear Friend, Where are you in my time of need?
This time is very painful for me
I need your words comforting and not of greed
Dear friend, where are you in my time of need?
I need you please do not reject my plead
Without you i dont know how I'll be
Dear Friend, Where are you in my time of need?
This time is very painful for me
| On February 14th 2008 xoxrinbabesxox Said: |
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| this is soo good |
| On February 13th 2008 numba1chic Said: |
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| wow thats sad, a true friend will be there especially in your times of need.... apparently you know that but some ppl should learn. very nice poem |
| On February 1st 2008 seekerovtruth Said: |
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| A true friend would be there. Perhaps it's time to find some new ones. JMO |
| On January 11th 2008 DarkSide1477 Said: |
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| wow strong emotion, great detail one of ur nicest yet |
| On January 9th 2008 ALIESAM21 Said: |
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| i love the way you make ppl feel when they read your poems! the way you make me feel...another great one! |
| On January 8th 2008 pinkheffalump Said: |
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| i hope the friend helps you |
| On January 8th 2008 fleainfested77 Said: |
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| i really like this one, i like the flow of it |
| On January 8th 2008 dyingagain666 Said: |
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| i like your work, it's painful and expresive. and i like it. |
| On January 7th 2008 coltaw Said: |
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| I like this style of poem, it takes some skill to make them coherant, and you pulled it off well. |


