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Created on 1-7-08
Assuming it was safe
Marybell answered the door
Three men charged in and tackled her to the floor
With noone else home
She had to fight for herself alone
They muffled her voice so noone passing by could hear
Threatened her so bad just to see her face fill with fear
She was held by the ankles and wrists
In immence pain they beat her with their powerfull fist
She struggled as much as she could
One man told her to stop or he'd kill her
And she believed he would
Helpless
Hopeless
She let them do what they pleased with her
They tore her clothes off and raped her
When they were satisfied they left her beaten and broken
They cleaned up their mess and not a word from her was spoken
When help arrived it was already too late
Nothing could take back her being raped
Please Login to post comments| On February 13th 2008 numba1chic Said : | |
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that is so sad... its really terrible that anyone should have to go through that... amazing poem though once again |
| On February 1st 2008 seekerovtruth Said : | |
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I sadly relate to this. Strong emotion here. Powerful and it make my blood boil to know someone else knows of this pain. :( |
| On January 29th 2008 jeff2625 Said : | |
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WoW! you had my attention all the way to the end..very heavy poem..and unfortunately very true for some people..good job writing it.. |
| On January 19th 2008 xxxAngelicaxxx Said : | |
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unusual topic but it was really good. |
| On January 17th 2008 imagae Said : | |
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This is very well written, evokes all kinds of emotion...::shudders:: |
| On January 15th 2008 lostxinxmusic Said : | |
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poor girl...thumbs up on the poem. |
| On January 11th 2008 DarkSide1477 Said : | |
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1st poem ive read about rape but it was pretty good |
| On January 9th 2008 xashleyrosex Said : | |
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this was so sad |
| On January 9th 2008 ALIESAM21 Said : | |
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Powerful...I know what it is liked to be raped, badly...it kills you, and i like the way you wrote this! |
| On January 8th 2008 pinkheffalump Said : | |
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this is a killer. no pun intended. but this is just, really, really good. GREEAT GREAT JOB!! *two thumbs up* |
| On January 8th 2008 fleainfested77 Said : | |
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this ones so fucked up, i mean what happened, your writing is good though |
| On January 7th 2008 mackenzie3893 Said : | |
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that was amazing.i was raped not to long ago. and its been hard. but im moving on.and i have grow stronger.
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| On January 7th 2008 coltaw Said : | |
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comes on strong and fast. It emerges the reader in the story quickly |
| On January 7th 2008 kmk5487 Said : | |
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wow ... that was ... wow lol |
