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Gone Again
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Created on 12-18-07
You left me again
Lost, confused and in pain
Left with out an explaination
Left me with a dead sensation
Left me and with no remorse
People say its time to take a new course
That our paths do not collide
That its finally time to say goodbye
But how can i move on when i dont want to?
How can i say goodbye when i still want you?
How can i walk away, when i came this far?
How could i forget, when i made you my wish on every bright star?
People dont know what we've been through
How could this be happening?
We were supposed to be a forever thing
How can i say goodbye when i stil want you?
How can i move on when i dont want to?
I hope you change your mind
I was yours and you were mine
Please Login to post comments| On February 21st 2008 AngelOfNight47 Said : | |
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i love it. it's another amazing one. i can so relate to this one. i love it when i can relate to poems and your poetry makes it so easy to relate to. i love it. |
| On February 2nd 2008 joemamafoo1 Said : | |
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i really like this one i can sorta relate to it |
| On February 1st 2008 seekerovtruth Said : | |
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Love is a two way street, and if only one is driving down it, the paths will never cross and it leads to nowhere. |
| On January 29th 2008 jeff2625 Said : | |
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good job..i like it.. |
| On January 29th 2008 jeff2625 Said : | |
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good job..i like it.. |
| On January 15th 2008 lostxinxmusic Said : | |
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oh yes i can totally relate to this. awesome work. |
| On January 8th 2008 pinkheffalump Said : | |
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this has a soft but great rhymes. very deep and meaningful. |
| On January 5th 2008 DeathMetalPunk Said : | |
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I know exactly where you're coming from. This poem is great I love it. |
| On January 1st 2008 DarkSide1477 Said : | |
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=( i felt this way once |
| On December 30th 2007 ALIESAM21 Said : | |
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This one is good! |
| On December 27th 2007 Carcer Said : | |
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Good work! i like the use of repetition with some words and the rhyming works well...keep up the good work! |
| On December 20th 2007 fleainfested77 Said : | |
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i cant think ofwhat song this reminds me of
but it does remind me of something i know the way it sounds thats it
i like it |
| On December 19th 2007 ellies15 Said : | |
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i like it. :) |
