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I Wish You Knew
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Created on 12-18-07
I heard a lot horrible things today
My phone rings, it's you
Suddenly those voices dont matter anymore
I wish you knew how good it is to hear you
I saw a lot of things i wish i didnt today
But when we met up, i saw you
Suddenly those visions dissapeared
I wish you knew how good it is to see you
I felt a lot of uncomfortable feelings today
You wrapped your arms around me tightly
A rush of warmth and security washed them away
I wish you knew how good it is to feel you
I was pretty depressed today
You asked me what was wrong
I told you all the nasty things that had happened
And you some how made everything better
I wish you knew how amazing it is to know you
Please Login to post comments| On June 9th 2008 Lunamoranya Said : | |
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this is happy....and i understand completely...it prob has the same feeling behind it as "saved" |
| On February 21st 2008 AngelOfNight47 Said : | |
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this is an amazing one. one of my favorites. it's nice to have someone like that. though be careful and don't take that person for granted because you might end up getting hurt. i love it. it's amazing. |
| On February 13th 2008 numba1chic Said : | |
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i love how all of your poetry has some sort of really deep meaning. im glad you could have somebody to make you feel like that though |
| On February 2nd 2008 joemamafoo1 Said : | |
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aw... thats so sweet |
| On February 1st 2008 seekerovtruth Said : | |
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Well if they read this, I guess they know now. I love how you wear your heart on your sleeve. Your writings come from deep inside, I can tell. |
| On January 15th 2008 lostxinxmusic Said : | |
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awww. great poem! =] |
| On January 8th 2008 pinkheffalump Said : | |
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yes it lifts the spirits. :] |
| On January 5th 2008 DeathMetalPunk Said : | |
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this one's awesome |
| On January 1st 2008 bambamwolf87 Said : | |
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I agree, so far, it's my favorite too. |
| On December 20th 2007 fleainfested77 Said : | |
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i remember you calling and reading this to me
THIS ONE is my favorite |
