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You Were Mine
Every night
I lay awake
Looking for feelings I can’t find
Can’t get you out of my mind
I wish I could go back in time
Back to when you were mine
When you were mine
You were mine
Reminiscing on the days we spent together
I can’t believe I can still hear your voice say forever
What happened?
We ended
Why?
I wish I could go back in time
Back to when you were mine
When you were mine
You were mine
Trying my hardest to let go of you
But in the process I’m losing me too
What was once my dream come true
Is now my worse nightmare
I wish I didn’t care
I wish I could go back in time
Back to when you were mine
When you were mine
You were mine
| On February 26th 2008 KellzerBellzer Said : | |
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aww, this is really sad!! you need a hug!! *hug* ^-^ |
| On February 21st 2008 oz10norrid Said : | |
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i really like this one esp the lines "What was once my dream come true/ Is now my worse nightmare"
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| On February 21st 2008 AngelOfNight47 Said : | |
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i love your style and definately agree with the rest. that would be an amazing song. i can so relate to that one too. |
| On February 18th 2008 svnna06 Said : | |
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betcha this is supposed to be a song!
and its awesomeeee. like seriously awesome. |
| On February 13th 2008 numba1chic Said : | |
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i agree with the rest of them, this was really nice and i love your style |
| On February 1st 2008 seekerovtruth Said : | |
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I could hear music when I read this one. I play a pretty mean "air" guitar. haha |
| On January 1st 2008 bambamwolf87 Said : | |
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make a great song. |
| On December 20th 2007 fleainfested77 Said : | |
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hm |
| On December 2nd 2007 pru1989 Said : | |
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wow i really love ur style brillent |
| On December 2nd 2007 pru1989 Said : | |
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wow i really love ur style brillent |
| On December 1st 2007 Lacrissa123 Said : | |
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I really like this poem it's awesome |


