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Time Bomb
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Created on 11-24-07
Tick, tick, tick
You’re fading away
Tick, tick, tick
Decide your fate
Waiting
Watching
Staring
Thinking
Wanting
Falling
Falling deeper and deeper
Into the hands that steal your time away
Heart beats mocking the seconds as they go by
An hour leaves you with an explosion
Your life’s a time bomb
Live your life before it goes off
Tick, tick, tick
You’re dying out
Tick, tick, tick
Make a decision quick
Look at the greedy hands pass the numbers you once had
Moving up on your time line
You’ll go at random
Waiting
Watching
Staring
Thinking
Wanting
Falling
Make today worth it
Hope today is worth it
Please Login to post comments| On February 26th 2008 KellzerBellzer Said : | |
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OMG!! this is amazing!!!!! |
| On February 21st 2008 AngelOfNight47 Said : | |
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two words. wonderfully amazing! it goest together perfectly and shows great meanings. i know there's the meaning you meant, but i also see another meaning in it that makes it that much better. i loved it. |
| On February 19th 2008 oz10norrid Said : | |
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you're really talented |
| On February 18th 2008 svnna06 Said : | |
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wow. that was hella good. |
| On February 1st 2008 seekerovtruth Said : | |
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I really like this one. Perhaps it just went unseen. I listed like a mad women when I first got here and I know most of mine have gone w/o viewing. |
| On December 20th 2007 fleainfested77 Said : | |
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make everyday worth it
tick tock |
