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Muse

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Come to me

Un-Vail your beauty

Show me all that you can be

Be my dreams

My guiding beam

 

My sweet obsession

My darkest confession 

 

Show me perfection

You have my attention

Hold me up high, you can never die

You are what keeps me alive

Don’t let me fall down

Keep me safe and sound

You’re my wall of protection

 

My sweetest obsession

My dark confession 

 

I’m venerable

Take advantage of me

I’ll submit my self to you

Take my innocence

Keep me forever

 

My sweet obsession

My darkest confession

Sweetest obsession.

Dark confession.

My Muse. 

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On February 21st 2008 KellzerBellzer Said :
KellzerBellzer wow, this is amazing!! i really like it...
On February 18th 2008 oz10norrid Said :
oz10norrid very nice...hope she liked it! and i like the allusion to greek mythology they always keep things interesting
On February 15th 2008 belenlovespooh Said :
belenlovespooh NICE
On February 1st 2008 seekerovtruth Said :
seekerovtruth I tend to agree with bambam it seems. We both think the same ones sound like songs.
On December 23rd 2007 bambamwolf87 Said :
bambamwolf87 nice, could make awesome song!
On December 20th 2007 fleainfested77 Said :
fleainfested77 stand strong
On December 20th 2007 amptone Said :
amptone AH, I like this one alot.