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Mom
Always bitching about my looks
You tell me how I should read different books
Every time I see you, you have something to argue about
We can never actually speak, just scream and shout
People say "mothers and daughters make best friends"
What happened to us? Where did our love end?
I get good grades and I look like me
What is it that you want me to do? Who do you want me to be?
You said I need to give you respect since I’m the child and you’re the mother
We need to really get away from each other
Tell everyone I’m your problem, I'm an embarrassment
One day I'm going to snap on you for all your harassment
| On August 30th 2008 KellzerBellzer Said : | |
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yup. same with my mom... great poem. Love it |
| On February 21st 2008 oz10norrid Said : | |
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wow, thats alot... and deep |
| On February 20th 2008 ninjane Said : | |
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good poem. kinda raw about relationships with mothers, i like that |
| On February 19th 2008 AngelOfNight47 Said : | |
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wow if that described the relationship between my mom and i much closer i'd be freaked out. great job. |
| On February 15th 2008 cheerwine14352 Said : | |
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this is really good! |
| On February 13th 2008 numba1chic Said : | |
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i used to be like this with my mother when i was in my mid teenage years until about the end.... now we are the best of friends... hopefully in time the same will happen for you. nice poem |
| On February 1st 2008 seekerovtruth Said : | |
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You know. When I was about 17 I shaved the sides of my hair and had huge spikes on top that I tipped in bright pink and my mother about lost her mind. lol |
| On January 29th 2008 jeff2625 Said : | |
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very good..u expressed ur feelings well in this one..good job.. |
| On December 20th 2007 fleainfested77 Said : | |
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this used tobe how me and my mom were
it gets better |
| On November 26th 2007 kelseyw68 Said : | |
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hey i can relate.. yeahh, this is really good! |


