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Illusonist

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Could this be an illusion?

Is this your mission?

The feeling of uncertainty

What is it that you do to me? 

 

This is my illusion

Hypnotized, confusion

Welcome to the things I don't understand

These are the things I can not stand

 

As if in a trance

Wilting like a dying plant

Fading memories

As if a dream in the past

How long will this last?

 

This is my illusion

Hypnotized, confusion

Welcome to the things I don't understand

These are the things I can not stand

 

This can't be right

Can you help me?

I need to fight

I won’t be fooled by this illusion

Speak of reality

I need out of this fantasy

You mean so much to me

I don't want to do this

 

This is my illusion

Hypnotized, confusion

Welcome to the things I don't understand

These are the things I can not stand

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On March 19th 2008 jeff2625 Said :
jeff2625 great poem... I love it..
On February 21st 2008 oz10norrid Said :
oz10norrid awesome..and i like the title
On February 19th 2008 AngelOfNight47 Said :
AngelOfNight47 ha ha that sounds so much like my mind on a daily basis. I love it. it's another great one.
On February 13th 2008 numba1chic Said :
numba1chic your poetry touches a lot of people, i can tell, your writings are just so real where in reality alot of people can relate and understand your feelings. another amazing poem :)
On February 2nd 2008 seekerovtruth Said :
seekerovtruth haha I do understand this feeling. I've always said "welcome to my nightmare" very similar. lol
On January 12th 2008 Lunamoranya Said :
Lunamoranya nice
On January 5th 2008 DeathMetalPunk Said :
DeathMetalPunk yea i agree, this one's awesome!
On December 20th 2007 fleainfested77 Said :
fleainfested77 very nicee
On November 25th 2007 evildarkness13 Said :
evildarkness13 wow, this speaks the mind of millions of people,, including me, nice job