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Hard Candy
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Created on 11-24-07
Talked online for only three weeks
You think you already know me
Told me to come over while my parents were out
Made screwdrivers, slipped you a roofie
You’re 36 and I’m 14
I knew exactly what you were trying to do to me
Teenage girls all over your walls
You claimed you knew them all
Have you seen them lately?
They seem to be missing
Chasing me into different chat rooms
Questioning my life, on top of my every word
So I did my homework too
As you stalked me I did the same to you
I found you out
The girls faces on fliers in your favorite restaurant
Let’s see how well you keep your food down
Let’s play operation
Its time for your castration
I'll give you something to picture now
Thought you'd make me like the other girls
When I was a step ahead of you the whole time
Show your love Jinean what you’re all about
Or kill yourself
Chasing me into different chat rooms
Questioning my life, on top of my every word
So I did my homework too
As you stalked me I did the same to you
I found you out
Before you jumped you asked me why and my real identity
You need to pay the price for the lives you stole
I stand for every girl you ever touched, looked at, raped and killed
I won’t clean your mess
Please Login to post comments| On August 8th 2008 DrRazorblade Said : | |
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Its sweet you turned a film into a poem. I to like to do this in ways myself. Great film fun poem to homage the film !!! Kudos. |
| On February 20th 2008 oz10norrid Said : | |
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tough subject and a very good way of puting it |
| On February 19th 2008 AngelOfNight47 Said : | |
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I definately like it. I like the perspective you wrote it. It's another amazing one. It's awesome and the message gets through so well. |
| On February 15th 2008 Beliathor Said : | |
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Yes,I agree... truly amazing...
pedos are creepy ... |
| On February 13th 2008 numba1chic Said : | |
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amazing, absolutly amazing.... |
| On February 3rd 2008 seekerovtruth Said : | |
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I came back to give you another thumbs up on this one. I am telling some people I know to come and check this out as it's one that you don't just read, it sort of follows you around for the rest of the day, in and out of chat rooms. EGADS It's stalking me. lol |
| On February 2nd 2008 seekerovtruth Said : | |
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Girl. You just got a standing ovation outta me! And the crowd goes wild. clap clap clap clap clap clap clap clap |
| On January 29th 2008 jeff2625 Said : | |
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WoW! love the poem...ur a good writer..guess it runs in ur veins... |
| On January 12th 2008 Lunamoranya Said : | |
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I love this movie...and I love this poem...i cant even say i have a favorite line, b/c i like it all |
| On December 20th 2007 fleainfested77 Said : | |
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this must be my favorite so far
cause it turns everything around, and youre not writing ABOUT it, youre writing exactly as though shewould have |
| On November 28th 2007 ALIESAM21 Said : | |
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wow....."I stand for every girl you ever touched, looked at, raped and killed " my fav. lines....really deep, and amazing! |
| On November 25th 2007 lostxinxmusic Said : | |
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love it. and i agree with what angelica said. |
| On November 25th 2007 xxxAngelicaxxx Said : | |
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wow i like the message in this one. its different.. not something many people would think to write about. i like it |
