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End Your Life
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Created on 11-24-07
Bleeding, bleeding
Suicide feeling
Not hearing, not seeing
Defend by the sounds of you’re past
Blinded by your life memories
Wondering how long this will last
Look at where life has drove you to be
Regretting you’re mistakes even more
Paralyzed on your floor
The sudden feeling of comfort comes about
As your veins spill blood like spouts
You’re life pictures fade away and your numb
You know after this Your done
Everything’s dark, that was at first bright
You’re last breathe will be taken tonight
No time for goodbyes, sorries or sorrows
Tonight will be the end of you’re tomorrows
Please Login to post comments| On February 20th 2008 oz10norrid Said : | |
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the last line is amazing... |
| On February 19th 2008 AngelOfNight47 Said : | |
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It was amazing. You're an awesome writer. I love this poem. Good reference from my poem "cutting" I liked reading it. |
| On February 18th 2008 svnna06 Said : | |
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your amazing. |
| On February 13th 2008 numba1chic Said : | |
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wow, this is very touching, keep me posted on any new poems you write cuz i can honestly say i have liked every poem ive read so far of yours |
| On February 3rd 2008 seekerovtruth Said : | |
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My 1st husband killed himself, and I never understood how someone could take such a chicken shitted way out of life UNTIL I myself hit a low low spot, and suddenly death was on my potential solution's to my vast problems list. (shaking head) Strange as this may sound, my dog Data saved my life. He's somewhat of a prick, very protective of me, and most find him frightening, (but he's not,he just watches me like a hawk) and when he saw me crying, he jumped up on my bed and started licking my face, and he snapped me out of it. I thought WHO would take care of you if I weren't here. He gave me a reason to live. Sometimes all people need is someone to need them to be alive, or just notice they exist. |
| On January 29th 2008 jeff2625 Said : | |
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good job! I like it.. |
| On January 11th 2008 Lunamoranya Said : | |
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this is neet...but it makes me really sad... |
| On December 20th 2007 fleainfested77 Said : | |
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wow... |
| On November 28th 2007 ALIESAM21 Said : | |
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this was absolutly excellent! keep up the amazing writing, can you pls keep me posted on all your new poems...thanks! |
| On November 25th 2007 lostxinxmusic Said : | |
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one word: TERRIFIC! |
