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Nothing Girl

Views (154) Pain Created on 5-26-08 Flag

I'm not your friend

I must be your nothing

 

And as your nothing girl

I offer you Everything

 

You, my Everything boy

Me, your nothing girl

 

 A hollow heart

Filled deeply with the universe

 

My universe

My Everything

 

Your planet

Your nothing

 

My Everything world

involved you completely 

 

Your nothing world

A mystery still 

 

Your nothing girl

overshadowed by all

 

Soul keeper of those

Everything three words

 

My Everything boy

Overshadows all

 

Holy soul reciever of those

nothing three words

 

Your nothing girl

Without substance, fades

 

As nothing clings

to my Everything boy

 

As nothing screams

for no more pain

 

As Everything blows

with one small gust

 

And nothing blows

tearfully away 

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On June 1st 2008 blahidyblah929 Said :
blahidyblah929 awww...... your never my nothing girl easha lee! Your my awesomely awesome friend! whom i miss dearly. and he will realize his mistake soon enough. something to be said about hurt, as i believe ive pointed out before. it sparks moving poetry. your poem is so simple, but still... i don't know.... epic, maybe? it's truly amazing.
On May 28th 2008 Calypso32 Said :
Calypso32 Your transitions are intriguing. Well crafted.~M.W
On May 27th 2008 poetryislife13 Said :
poetryislife13 this is really good! comment mine if ya would!! =}
On May 26th 2008 audica Said :
audica thats really good.
On May 26th 2008 TheBranster Said :
TheBranster it would be funt o have a super hero named "nothing girl". she could climb fire walls and spit daisies