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Created on 2-8-08
I cover everything in a cloak of black.
Now no one can see a thing.
Over me is a blanket of stars.
I wear a small silver badge, the moon.
The moon and stars try to shine through.
But I defeat them, holding true to my dark nature.
Now, the sun is coming, it won't win!
I try to prevail,
holding fast as the moon and stars flee.
But I am defeated
Until tonight, cruel sun.
Please Login to post comments| On February 26th 2008 TheDragonwitch Said : | |
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This is really good, does the sun win for etheral reasons? |
| On February 12th 2008 blahidyblah929 Said : | |
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i can't decide if its cute or epic lol. I love the ending. |
| On February 8th 2008 Halfpint9135 Said : | |
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Okay...maybe I edited it a teeny bit |
