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An angel gets too close to a demon

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Fallen

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A precious Angel,
leans over her cloud
        To whisper sweet nothings
        With a demon of the Earth
He can't visit often
but she longs for his words
        Living for his voice
        The wisdom it holds
She turns her head
For only a second
        He had come too close
        Down, she's pushed
Not quite to hell
close enough
        To feel the heat
        And pain it holds
She weeps,
He's indifferent
         What could such a monster
         do to ease the pain?
She begs,
he falters
        As such a sad
        mournful song.
She offers up,
her broken heart
        The only thing left,
        to give.
A moments thought
a tear or two
        A Demon Will cry,
        If so moved.
She flys back to heaven
on tentative wings.
        A shamefaced Demon
        Steadfast at her side.

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On February 27th 2008 mydragonlord Said :
mydragonlord Oooo that was good!!!
On February 26th 2008 TheDragonwitch Said :
TheDragonwitch Nicely done! Like the theme
On February 8th 2008 listen147 Said :
listen147 wow! thats... im speechless. i dont know what to say but awesome job!
On January 30th 2008 irwinwe Said :
irwinwe beautiful!
On January 29th 2008 blahidyblah929 Said :
blahidyblah929 Wow alicia. im so jealous of your poem. this is amazing!
On January 25th 2008 Daemion Said :
Daemion nice... i like! but for what purpose are the indentations?