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An angel gets too close to a demonRate this Poem
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Fallen
A precious Angel,
leans over her cloud
To whisper sweet nothings
With a demon of the Earth
He can't visit often
but she longs for his words
Living for his voice
The wisdom it holds
She turns her head
For only a second
He had come too close
Down, she's pushed
Not quite to hell
close enough
To feel the heat
And pain it holds
She weeps,
He's indifferent
What could such a monster
do to ease the pain?
She begs,
he falters
As such a sad
mournful song.
She offers up,
her broken heart
The only thing left,
to give.
A moments thought
a tear or two
A Demon Will cry,
If so moved.
She flys back to heaven
on tentative wings.
A shamefaced Demon
Steadfast at her side.
leans over her cloud
To whisper sweet nothings
With a demon of the Earth
He can't visit often
but she longs for his words
Living for his voice
The wisdom it holds
She turns her head
For only a second
He had come too close
Down, she's pushed
Not quite to hell
close enough
To feel the heat
And pain it holds
She weeps,
He's indifferent
What could such a monster
do to ease the pain?
She begs,
he falters
As such a sad
mournful song.
She offers up,
her broken heart
The only thing left,
to give.
A moments thought
a tear or two
A Demon Will cry,
If so moved.
She flys back to heaven
on tentative wings.
A shamefaced Demon
Steadfast at her side.
| On February 27th 2008 mydragonlord Said : | |
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Oooo that was good!!! |
| On February 26th 2008 TheDragonwitch Said : | |
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Nicely done! Like the theme |
| On February 8th 2008 listen147 Said : | |
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wow! thats... im speechless. i dont know what to say but awesome job! |
| On January 30th 2008 irwinwe Said : | |
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beautiful! |
| On January 29th 2008 blahidyblah929 Said : | |
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Wow alicia. im so jealous of your poem. this is amazing! |
| On January 25th 2008 Daemion Said : | |
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nice... i like! but for what purpose are the indentations? |


