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So this is death

Views (86) Pain Created on 8-26-07 Flag

Dad crys, my heart races

Who's sick, Who's hurt?

 

Not the mother, but the daughter

So this is death

 

Was it her time?

She was in pain

 

She was strong

my favorite Aunt

I looked up to her

So this is death 

 

So many people loved her

Ans she loved them all too

There was so much happening

But she was never bitter

 

I was supposed to spend

the weekend with her

I'll never get that chance

So this is death 

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On June 25th 2008 charissa14 Said :
charissa14 sorry for your loss ... even though that doesn't stand for anything ... i like this poem
On December 6th 2007 SpiffyKnickers Said :
SpiffyKnickers that's terrible =[
On August 28th 2007 phprincess01 Said :
phprincess01 i am so sorry!!!
On August 26th 2007 blahidyblah929 Said :
blahidyblah929 omg alicia!!!!!! im calling you now.
On August 26th 2007 Halfpint9135 Said :
Halfpint9135 My Aunt was a juvenile, brittle diabetic. She lived to be about 40 and that's a very long time. She was a double amputee and I loved her so much. She was amazing