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Waiting for my Prince to Rescue me.

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How Long Must I Wait?

Views (104) Passion Created on 8-14-07 Flag
how Long does my heart
have to ache?
                  I'm so excited.
       not knowing 
                    who he is.
    but knowing he'll 
                          complete.
         my unfinished 
                        Puzzle
  Can he hurry up.
              does he have
enough time.
      i can tell you one 
                          thing.
  that i know
                          I LOVE HIM.

cause he's all mine.
 
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On January 31st 2008 Daemion Said :
Daemion are the lines broken for a reason?
On November 23rd 2007 InvisibleFlame Said :
InvisibleFlame Oh I REALLY like this! So creative and cute!
On October 27th 2007 evildarkness13 Said :
evildarkness13 hmm, different, but good
On October 6th 2007 Gumby12323498 Said :
Gumby12323498 :Dthanks.
On August 26th 2007 Ericnessxo Said :
Ericnessxo Love the way the poem flows. Good vibe from it. Nice work once again.
On August 15th 2007 Gumby12323498 Said :
Gumby12323498 thank you thank you
On August 15th 2007 browneyes33 Said :
browneyes33 Great job!!
On August 14th 2007 milolover36 Said :
milolover36 AWESOME!!!
On August 14th 2007 demonica666 Said :
demonica666 great poem
On August 14th 2007 Gumby12323498 Said :
Gumby12323498 thanks.
On August 14th 2007 nickandfallon Said :
nickandfallon Very good poem! Great job!