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Created:
06/04 2007
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1135
Category:
Love
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A Broken Heart |
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A Broken Heart
It broke my heart
when i saw u with her
my heart just dropped
i wanted to cry
but i stood my ground instead
and i held my head up high
i went home and
called my friend
she said just dont worry
about it
it will be okay
but it dont matter
because my heart was broke that day
Please Login to post comments| On June 27th 2007 micah544 Said: |
| i like it! i can relate to it. |
| On June 6th 2007 pinkstar5 Said: |
| nice poem :) really gets into the feelings... |
| On June 6th 2007 JakeThigpen Said: |
| I didn't like it. |
| On June 4th 2007 PRiiSCiiLLA Said: |
| wow. this is really good. [: |
| On June 4th 2007 Paul4379 Said: |
| i felt this was a bit junior high (high); if you want to read some inspired poetry look at my later or earlier work. some's good; some not so much. |
| On June 4th 2007 marlana79 Said: |
| ya I am going through the same shit. Read my poem. Mabye you will understand....:) |
| On June 4th 2007 pinkchickemma Said: |
| good poem =] |
| On June 4th 2007 belle2013 Said: |
| this was good , this describes me! ha lol!i feltbad wen i saw him w/her. keep up ritin. |
| On June 4th 2007 will8bubba5 Said: |
| it is a cool idea and its your feelings which is cool but as far as grammer your random ryme in the middle its a crapy poem but keep it up |
| On June 4th 2007 steviestuds Said: |
| i love it |
| On June 4th 2007 babyblue187954 Said: |
| I like it Great joB! |
| On June 4th 2007 mcihellejane Said: |
| nice poem-that situation is tough and it does break hearts~ |
| On June 4th 2007 Brighteyes4u Said: |
| I really liked it!! |
