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Ms.Mary Mack

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Created on 12-21-06

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Ms.Mary mack,mack,mack

all dressed in black,black,black

she has a knife,knife,knife

stuck in her back,back,back

she cannot breathe,breathe,breathe

and now she bleeds,bleeds,bleeds

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On April 3rd 2007 joplink Said :

	Are your trying to represent an echo? If so it gives this alot of atmosphere. Nice job!