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Still

Views (155) Love Created on 6-12-07 Flag

I can't forget you, you're carved in my heart,

You're long gone now, but you left your mark,

I still see your face when I invision good things,

And in my eyes you still have your halo and wings,

But you cut me bad and it still hurts,

Just the thought of you makes my stomach turn,

You still say that we are meant to be together,

You brought a child into this now what will you tell her?,

I'm constantly wondering how it would be,

If I was still with you, if you were still with me,

I can still feel your hugs years after you've gone,

But I still have to remember how you did me wrong,

The void that you left is too hard to fill,

Because without you time just stands still.

By:Gloria N                               08/2002

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On July 8th 2007 gaia17 Said :
gaia17 wow. I can really feel the emotion.
On July 5th 2007 softballdemon Said :
softballdemon That's really good. i like the description. you're very good.
On June 30th 2007 jarnotti Said :
jarnotti love this
On June 28th 2007 xxcassiejayxx Said :
xxcassiejayxx wow ilove it
On June 26th 2007 Tiffiscool16 Said :
Tiffiscool16 very expressive, excellent work!
On June 25th 2007 shandel91 Said :
shandel91 it gave me chill's i dunno why but it was really good
On June 18th 2007 tswieberg Said :
tswieberg I love the emotion....we have all experienced this at one time I am sure. Great poem Gloria.
On June 14th 2007 kjoy428 Said :
kjoy428 i like this one! good job!
On June 13th 2007 jarnotti Said :
jarnotti thats good i like it
On June 13th 2007 hardcorpschick Said :
hardcorpschick you can make people feel your pain.
On June 13th 2007 salamanteri Said :
salamanteri really good poem.-
On June 12th 2007 Glork21 Said :
Glork21 the child was his not mine. Get it now?
On June 12th 2007 jewells716 Said :
jewells716 this is really good. and agreeing with the first person the first part of this does describe my situation as i'm sure a lot of others as well. great job!
On June 12th 2007 mrskritter Said :
mrskritter wonderful work
On June 12th 2007 California1516 Said :
California1516 the first part DEF. described my situation..the rest didnt cuz i dont have a baby...this is really good :)