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letting go of Love....

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Memory

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I see your face in distant smoke,

I hear a whisper of the words you spoke,

Your just a bad memory in my head now,

I don't know why and I don't know how,

But you stole my heart and I took it back,

Because once you touched it, it began to crack,

The pain was so unreal,

And it took so long to heal,

Even though my heart is mended now the scars still show,

But you keep trying to hold on after YOU already let go,

I know you have memories of all the good times we had,

But I only remember all the bad,

I hear a whisper of the words you spoke,

But your face is hidden behind the smoke.

By Gloria N              03/04/03

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On June 26th 2007 Tiffiscool16 Said :
Tiffiscool16 I like how in the end you say his face was hidden behind the smoke.
On June 25th 2007 shandel91 Said :
shandel91 i like the like the whole thing but my favorite part is when you say "But you stole my heart and I took it back, Because once you touched it, it began to crack,"
On June 18th 2007 tswieberg Said :
tswieberg Brilliant...My favorite line is, "But you keep trying to hold on after YOU already let go."
On June 14th 2007 rokmisox26 Said :
rokmisox26 very good:)
On June 13th 2007 hardcorpschick Said :
hardcorpschick really like this.
On June 12th 2007 babygurlj6 Said :
babygurlj6 omg thats really good!!!
On June 12th 2007 jewells716 Said :
jewells716 this is VERY very good. i like it a lot. describes a past relationship of mine.
On June 12th 2007 mrskritter Said :
mrskritter cool very nice
On June 12th 2007 xxcassiejayxx Said :
xxcassiejayxx very good